You reminded me of a nice conversation between two friends in one of Rand's books 'We the Living'...I liked your 160... merging with the soul..ultimate of existence perhaps..
Visiting after a long gap as my home PC was not working. Read all current and some old poems. A Gift For You shows the anger so well. Dad, Father, Farther shows deep love between father and daughter. Eternal Enemies, very sound and much needed advice. Within Pages shows deep feelings and so does Totality.
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Love and sex - all or nothing at all. I really think all women feel that way, but some sell themselves out. Your poem captures the true emotion. Thanks, Gay @beachanny
It's either beautiful or stalkerish (yes, that's a compliment - it variable mood(s), depending on the reader). Given the tone of your site, I'll vote for the beautiful.
I like this very much. Nice 160. :-)
ReplyDeletePowerful 160.
ReplyDeletehmm...plunge myself
ReplyDeleteinto your luminous soul...sounds good..nice 160!
woohoo...that sounds like fun....smiles. nice 160.
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HA! Very good! I hope it was so worth it.
ReplyDeleteThis is good. I like it a lot.
ReplyDeleteYou reminded me of a nice conversation between two friends in one of Rand's books 'We the Living'...I liked your 160... merging with the soul..ultimate of existence perhaps..
ReplyDeleteAll or nothing love? That might actually be the best.
ReplyDeleteThat sounds like a joyful plunge. Great 160. Thanks for playing.
ReplyDeletewow :)
ReplyDeleteWow. Intense, and shuddering.
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This and That. Here and There. Now, Sometimes Then.
wonderful! plunge myself into your luminous soul ... wonderful embrace of totality!
ReplyDeleteI do insist.
ReplyDeletemmm loving this! all or nothing. xo
ReplyDeleteSo wonderful and passionate!
ReplyDeleteLove the use of 'plunge' and 'luminous' - lovely image
ReplyDeleteA good conviction!
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ReplyDeleteVisiting after a long gap as my home PC was not working. Read all current and some old poems. A Gift For You shows the anger so well. Dad, Father, Farther shows deep love between father and daughter. Eternal Enemies, very sound and much needed advice. Within Pages shows deep feelings and so does Totality.
Take care
PS : Looking for your visit. You can navigate by clicking on my name here.
All or nothing, eh? Nice One Shot, Gautami!
ReplyDeletea good way to be Gautami. they asked for it.
ReplyDeleteLove and sex - all or nothing at all. I really think all women feel that way, but some sell themselves out. Your poem captures the true emotion. Thanks, Gay @beachanny
ReplyDeleteWhat a perfect free verse... I liked it so much... Plunge...
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very clear. And well put. Excellent One Shot 160!
ReplyDeletea great share..i love the 160's just havent had time of late to take part.. thanks for sharing wiht one shot
ReplyDeleteI only believe in totality... Great one shot. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteIt's either beautiful or stalkerish (yes, that's a compliment - it variable mood(s), depending on the reader). Given the tone of your site, I'll vote for the beautiful.
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