Amazed by the likeness in message to mine. http://sillyfrogsusan.wordpress.com/2010/10/11/forensic-feelings/ Yours holds even more power in fewer words:-)
The theme 4 our Monday poetry potluck this week is 7 sins…if you could write a poem related to our theme, link to our potluck, that’s would be a bliss to us, you could simply link in a random poem to share, the pleasure is all yours. check out us at http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/, our potluck is open Sunday 8pm to Wednesday, 8am. Hope to see you in our team this week.
Oooh there's a lot in that 160, well done!
ReplyDeleteI can understand about "death vibes." Nice haibun.
ReplyDeleteMy first Sunday 160: Sunday 160
dang...you say much in your 160...and set just the tone...great job!
ReplyDelete"If looks could kill."
ReplyDeleteInteresting 160.
My 160 is here.
very powerful Alice said it best. "If looks could kill..."
ReplyDeleteDeath vibes...Amazing imagery.
ReplyDelete160 Haiku,
ReplyDeletevery smart one!
Very powerful 160!
ReplyDeletedeep!...can anyone be that bad?
ReplyDeletethanks for linking !
ReplyDeleteDeath vibes indeed...nicely done.
ReplyDeleteVery powerful words my friend xx Thanks for linking with Potluck xx
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful... Liked it so much and I think I will try this type some time soon.. and will let you know...
ReplyDeleteजय दुर्गा जी, जय काली माँ
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death vibes? she must be a sorcerer? wanting to phase-out those societal ills...
ReplyDeletevery nice haibun? is it?
thanks for taking part in my prompt this week...your served a challenging verse worth thinking!
Amazed by the likeness in message to mine.
ReplyDeletehttp://sillyfrogsusan.wordpress.com/2010/10/11/forensic-feelings/
Yours holds even more power in fewer words:-)
ouch! death vibes. I'll be good!
ReplyDeletegreat post.
Wow! This packs a lot of meaning in a few words!
ReplyDeleteThere is a distinct projection of a curse on the wind! Quite intimidating! Very clever use of powerful words!
ReplyDeleteGreat 160. Thanks so much for playing. Love this.
ReplyDeletedead vibes?interesting..nice 160
ReplyDelete160 degrees turn :D
ReplyDeletenicely done
Cheers!!!
too good !! :)
ReplyDeleteWow! 160 that packs a punch. Well done...
ReplyDeleteWOW! death vibes. Powerful stuff.
ReplyDeleteShort yet powerful.
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ReplyDeletehelp visit Talon to wish her a happy birthday today,
Thanks!
The theme 4 our Monday poetry potluck this week is 7 sins…if you could write a poem related to our theme, link to our potluck, that’s would be a bliss to us, you could simply link in a random poem to share, the pleasure is all yours.
ReplyDeletecheck out us at http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/,
our potluck is open Sunday 8pm to Wednesday, 8am.
Hope to see you in our team this week.
only one poem a week beginning next week.