a tablet of time broken-
no one can break the aeons
they move so fast
in a blink.
here the tablet lies in debris
the moments already passed
into eternity
I see the dates
(a day of masquerades?)
I bury myself under the tablet,
into the debris,
fall asleep, with time
I don't need any other lover
Nice Mag. Fitting t the prompt indeed. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteVery well written!
ReplyDeleteNice images. You've managed well to do two prompts in one poem!
ReplyDeletethats very well written.
ReplyDeleteVery imaginative, Gautami!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful... and tightly written.
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Wysteria
Very nice. The last line was a surprise.
ReplyDeleteI like the broken marker representing broken time. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteAnother excellent last line.
ReplyDeleteI like this; it makes me think of a nostalgia to be part of something bigger, stretching back through time.
ReplyDeleteVery good. I like it.
ReplyDeletewhew...i like the last line especially...nice close...
ReplyDeleteTime can be a great friend but a dangerous lover! :-)
ReplyDeleteFine writing... broken time was very nicely done....
ReplyDeleteVery true my friend. Well done.
ReplyDeleteAh, so very clever and well-crafted!
ReplyDeletevery well written-nice Magpie
ReplyDeleteI love the first line 'tablet of time broken' well written piece
ReplyDeleteOnly you could write a poem like this. Perfect.
ReplyDeletecurling up in the cracks of history with Father Time :)
ReplyDeleteBroken tablet,,broken time. It seemed to me you were talking to her,,,as you don't need another lover. Very nice,I like it
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