Saturday, 23 October 2010

an ode

the contours
the grace
yet you will burn me
moisture escapes from your orifice
snakes of steam hiss out of you
I am in awe of you

"indulge me, pressure cooker"
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24 comments:

  1. Brian Miller24 October 2010 at 06:35

    haha. love the close as i thought this was going somewhere else...lol. nice 160.

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  2. Mona24 October 2010 at 06:42

    For a while, my mind was in the gutter ;D

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  3. Sweetest in the Gale24 October 2010 at 07:36

    Passionate, dangerous...loved it!

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  4. Monkey Man24 October 2010 at 10:16

    Like Mona, my mind started in the gutter. Great 160 and thanks for playing.

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  5. SandyCarlson24 October 2010 at 11:13

    I fear mine! Perhaps it reminds me of myself....

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  6. PattiKen24 October 2010 at 13:41

    Dangerous, indeed. But ah, consider the rewards.

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  7. spiritsoflena24 October 2010 at 14:43

    Nicely done!! very clever.

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  8. ρομπερτ24 October 2010 at 15:32

    Hot.

    Please have a good new week.



    daily athens

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  9. Tammie Lee24 October 2010 at 17:42

    such a wild combination of qualities, I would be in awe as well.

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  10. Rene/ Not The Rockefellers24 October 2010 at 18:10

    heh Mona, me too :)

    and that hissing used to scare the heck out of me

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  11. Ramesh Sood25 October 2010 at 03:08

    I remember one blsting in our kitchen.. thankfully none was around.. but then to be so contemplative..you continue to amaze me Gautami..

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  12. Strummed Words25 October 2010 at 07:47

    A pressure cooker as metaphor :) Nicely done!

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  13. irene25 October 2010 at 07:56

    Surprising!

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  14. Sumit Sarkar25 October 2010 at 08:10

    haha...a clever one..nice :)

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  15. Jingle25 October 2010 at 08:45

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/23/6244/

    Thanks a lot for the support to Jingle Poetry Potluck, I could not always find time to show how much we appreciate your support, here, three awards for you, hope to see you in of week 7, our theme is love and romance. Happy Monday, Happy Blogging! xxx

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  16. Me25 October 2010 at 17:49

    Haha...nicely played. :)
    -C

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  17. joanny25 October 2010 at 20:56

    Sensual, steamy, daringly delicious.

    Nicely crafted for any kind of poem.

    Joanny

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  18. Alice Audrey25 October 2010 at 21:06

    Pressure cookers are well worthy of the awe.

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  19. Amity25 October 2010 at 21:40

    didn't know it's a pressure cooker, til u said so!

    nice work!

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  20. Geraldine26 October 2010 at 10:29

    This is intense Gautami. A very original look at grace.

    www.veggiesyarnsandtails.wordpress.com
    www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com

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  21. She26 October 2010 at 11:17

    good one! We just used our pressure cooker this past weekend too! I like the surprise ending here...nice 160

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  22. Dianne28 October 2010 at 08:11

    OK....Ooooo Kayyyyy
    I love this hot piece!

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  23. Patti29 October 2010 at 15:36

    That was great! Good one!

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  24. gabrielle29 October 2010 at 20:46

    steamy, delicious.

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