Sunday, 2 October 2011

unspoken

I wrote that headline in my note book
you tore it
lonely page wandered
bereft of energy
a joke you said
I know better

music is the only language you understand


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24 comments:

  1. Poetic Bloomings2 October 2011 at 09:52

    Very nice use of form and the words. Glad to have you join us at POETIC BLOOMINGS.

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  2. Brian Miller2 October 2011 at 10:12

    could be...as music certainly speaks to the soul...

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  3. Monkey Man2 October 2011 at 10:13

    Well played.

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  4. Mama Zen2 October 2011 at 17:12

    Fabulous 160!

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  5. SandyCarlson2 October 2011 at 17:52

    Nicely done! A disenfranchised thought and feeling....

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  6. Mary3 October 2011 at 05:33

    Well composed and played!

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  7. Old Ollie3 October 2011 at 05:58

    nice - this is authentic

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  8. Sandra3 October 2011 at 06:38

    words full of energy...thanks Gautami!

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  9. Tarang Sinha3 October 2011 at 08:33

    Really nice!:)

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  10. shawnacymariekiker3 October 2011 at 10:26

    brief but visible. the fragment of page, the missive misguided. there is a wistfulness here, borne aloft like a scrap of paper.
    liked it very much.

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  11. roughwaterjohn3 October 2011 at 14:00

    Very well done, I thoroughly enjoyed this!

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  12. ρομπερτ3 October 2011 at 14:11

    strength.

    please have a wonderful tuesday.

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  13. Marbles in My Pocket3 October 2011 at 14:49

    A very nice write!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/two-yearning-heart/

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  14. cj Schlottman3 October 2011 at 18:56

    As usual, your words are heavy with meaning. There is certainly power in music.

    Namaste..........cj

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  15. Harshad mehta3 October 2011 at 20:15

    Yes, thank God there is music. People are difficult to understand. Should one try at all?

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  16. Harshad mehta3 October 2011 at 20:16

    Yes, thank God there is music. People are difficult to understand. Should one try at all?

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  17. Ann LeFlore4 October 2011 at 09:32

    I am so happy that music is here and everyone loves to listen to this can sure help when expressing feeling and words can not be found or the right ones can not be said great job
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/03/memories-and-photographs-of-you/#comment-1370

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  18. Pam4 October 2011 at 16:56

    Very nice response to the prompts.

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  19. Andy4 October 2011 at 17:16

    Hello.
    Music & poetry...is anything else needed?

    Nicely done as usual.

    Thief In The Night

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  20. Morning4 October 2011 at 19:26

    cute.
    smart words.

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  21. Suzy Q5 October 2011 at 10:42

    So good! I love the subtle form and the pause that overtakes the last line.

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  22. emily wierenga5 October 2011 at 19:32

    so much power in so few words. love it.

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  23. darkangelwrites5 October 2011 at 20:35

    Who would you let get that close that they could tear your words... there is more here.

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  24. Magical Mystical Teacher7 October 2011 at 18:06

    Music is the language beyond words...

    This Fence Knows Riddles

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