Thursday, 13 October 2011

hambre

the vibrations
permeates into me
I try to transfer those to you
will you please accept it-
letting me have my way with you
piece by piece...
I....hunger.....for.....you
you.....hunger....for....me
why don't we let our bodies
follow our mind and hearts

"come admire the bond,
those silken ties......silken ties"
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24 comments:

  1. Eric 'Bubba' Alder13 October 2011 at 11:51

    Such a shared vibration can indeed be quite a delight!

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  2. oldegg13 October 2011 at 14:42

    Don't just talk about it...do it!

    Well, I would certainly be caught in those silken ties, trapped in the net of your words.

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  3. Andy Sewina13 October 2011 at 15:10

    WoW! Now you're talking!!!

    <3

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  4. G-Man13 October 2011 at 18:50

    Gautami...WOW!!!
    I Love Erotic 55's
    You are Marvelous at it.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  5. Alice Audrey13 October 2011 at 18:53

    Hot! Now you're cooking.

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  6. Brian Miller13 October 2011 at 19:09

    hey silken ties just add to the fun...smiles. hot piece...

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  7. Ella13 October 2011 at 20:34

    Wow, you did a brilliant job with this one! The silken ties says it all ;D

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  8. jaerose14 October 2011 at 01:55

    What a sizzling piece Gautami..seizing the moment..Jae

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  9. Kikit14 October 2011 at 02:01

    hi there. i love this one. you inspire me to make another stimulating poem. :)

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  10. mylittlewordz14 October 2011 at 03:27

    Nicely erotic, especially the bit about bodies following minds.
    Jamie.

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  11. izzy14 October 2011 at 04:52

    -Heaven- ( Wish I could italicize
    it) Thanks

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  12. Celestial Dreamz14 October 2011 at 07:39

    so well done :)

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  13. Claudia14 October 2011 at 08:10

    hmmm yes...why not...they should..smiles

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  14. MorningAJ14 October 2011 at 08:25

    As long as both agree. Go for it!

    My 55

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  15. Mama Zen14 October 2011 at 12:03

    Yes!

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  16. Mama Zen14 October 2011 at 12:03

    Yes!

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  17. Unnamed Psalmist15 October 2011 at 02:12

    simple and true!

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  18. Ramesh Sood15 October 2011 at 10:08

    Absolutely beauiful..see you tmrw at OSI..

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  19. SandyCarlson15 October 2011 at 17:39

    Nicely done!

    Your prompt, paper, is up at OSI in the morning. Sorry about the short notice. I will link the post to your site.

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  20. Susie Clevenger16 October 2011 at 13:42

    sensual, suggestive, delightful :)

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  21. Eileen T O'Neill .....16 October 2011 at 16:09

    A very sensual piece of writing!

    Eileen

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  22. rch17 October 2011 at 09:40

    I'm all shook up over this one (sorry couldn't resist) great job!

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  23. Sheilagh Lee18 October 2011 at 19:21

    Great poem

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  24. The Poetry Palace22 October 2011 at 12:51

    way to go.

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