Saturday, 16 April 2011

"more" me


with knick knacks
I have created space
that is unique to me
in a palette
colours bleed into each other
merging my soul
I have thrown shackles
at threshold of me
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22 comments:

  1. Ramesh Sood16 April 2011 at 23:15

    Your page most of the time make me sit and wonder..and think.. you create master pieces and that can happen only with the help of an unshackled mind..and heart.. when spirit flows in abundance..no boundaries..total freedom to create.. Thanks Gautami..happy to be here..

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  2. Greyscale Territory17 April 2011 at 00:38

    Love the idea of knick knacks symbloising elements of a personality! How true! Lovely poem!

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  3. Harshad mehta17 April 2011 at 03:53

    A peep into the SPACE WITHIN. Unique to each one.

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  4. Linda Jacobs17 April 2011 at 04:33

    I love the word "threshold" here! It surprised me and I had to think about it but it's perfect!

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  5. 5thsister17 April 2011 at 06:42

    Yes! They are our "truth"!

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  6. ayala17 April 2011 at 06:59

    Lovely!

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  7. Swapna John17 April 2011 at 08:11

    Nice one, friend

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  8. teric17 April 2011 at 10:46

    Very interesting thoughts and comparisons. How true for us all.

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  9. Brian Miller17 April 2011 at 11:11

    i kinda like it when the colors bleed...not so much with shackles..

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  10. Monkey Man17 April 2011 at 11:14

    Knick Knacks are an expression of color and self. I like this. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.

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  11. Bill17 April 2011 at 11:18

    my bookshelves
    the spaces I planned
    to leave empty

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  12. Christine17 April 2011 at 13:14

    ones knick knacks certainly speak volumes of who they are, love this poem.

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  13. Andy17 April 2011 at 19:21

    Nice interpretation Gautami

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  14. eof77718 April 2011 at 02:24

    You write beautiful succinct poetry... I enjoyed my visit.
    Thanks for stopping by my blog. I'm following you via GFC.
    Best,
    Elizabeth

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  15. Jingle Poetry18 April 2011 at 08:22

    wise and true.
    well done,

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  16. PremI18 April 2011 at 12:36

    A wonderful space to visit...
    very well written.

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  17. Lyn18 April 2011 at 13:23

    The space within and without match...perfect!

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  18. lynnaima18 April 2011 at 18:24

    "shackles at threshold of me" hmmm I am savouring/pondering this, sweet!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

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  19. bodhirose19 April 2011 at 11:31

    Ah, I like how you put this, Gautami--very clever and beautifully done.

    My potluck entry: http://bodhirose.wordpress.com/2011/04/06/lovely-horror/

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  20. fiveloaf19 April 2011 at 11:52

    nice.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/

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  21. Mia19 April 2011 at 14:14

    so lovely, thank you!

    Luna

    http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/

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  22. Cassiopeia Rises23 April 2011 at 14:54

    Lovely and nicely put my friend....

    Melanie

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