Saturday, 23 April 2011

from one room to another

from one room to another
I walk miles
in the inner sanction of my mind
you lock me in your pendant
I am outside with my words.
which reverberate the time
from the tiny window
I see the life force
locked in your horns
trapped inside a vacuum

"let me create melody from meaningless sounds"
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24 comments:

  1. flaubert23 April 2011 at 11:16

    Just gorgeous, Gautami, and I love the ending.

    Pamela

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  2. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik23 April 2011 at 11:27

    Beautiful swaying poem....lovely movement...wonder if you wrote sanction instead of sanctum of the mind intentionally or inadvertently ...obviously both would carry different meanings...lovely to meet you..

    if you do visit my blog today ...My entries are of a rather uncharacteristic silly nature.... Please feel free to skip about

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  3. gautami tripathy23 April 2011 at 11:31

    @Dr. Pearl: I wrote sanction, never even thought of sanctum....

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  4. Paulami23 April 2011 at 14:40

    loved your poetry and even i thought you meant sanctum. despite that i feel each of the words would have given beauty to these words..

    you just got yourself a new admirer :)

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  5. Whitesnake23 April 2011 at 15:02

    I do hope the dust settles soonest

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  6. Mary23 April 2011 at 17:23

    Excelent, Gautami. One CAN walk miles right within one's own mind. So many rooms.....

    http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2011/04/to-god.html

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  7. Amanda Moore23 April 2011 at 19:37

    just beautiful really that last line is fantastic and haunting!

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  8. teric23 April 2011 at 21:51

    Beautiful and moving. Love the imagery you provoked.

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  9. Ramesh Sood23 April 2011 at 21:54

    Yet most of the time we find ourselves busy..finding meaningless sounds..even in melodies.. thanks Gautami a lovely poem as usual..

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  10. Rawknrobyn.blogspot.com23 April 2011 at 22:57

    The poetry flows so beautifully with the words you choose.
    Be well.
    xoRobyn

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  11. Harshad mehta23 April 2011 at 23:51

    One walks infinite distance in mind.

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  12. Anna24 April 2011 at 02:29

    Lovely poem.

    It is interesting to weigh words. To change just one word can change the whole meaning of a text.

    Best wishes,
    Anna


    Anna's SC-51-Harvey's Place

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  13. Felicity24 April 2011 at 07:42

    beautiful
    especially "you lock me in your pendant"

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  14. Sweetest in the Gale24 April 2011 at 11:08

    Such beautiful words and imagery...loved this.

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  15. Jingle24 April 2011 at 12:26

    trapped in a vacuum, wow.

    powerful write, you rock.

    Happy Sunday.

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  16. cj Schlottman24 April 2011 at 17:54

    The image of being locked in a pendant is strong and concrete. Well done.

    Namaste..........cj

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  17. my secret innuendo24 April 2011 at 22:01

    let me always create melody from endless sounds.. my words flow to me too as my melody. love your writing

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  18. Kim Nelson25 April 2011 at 12:22

    I read this several times to tease out various meanings. I suspect we all have walked such journeys, and with many different outcomes. I like the conclusion you drew.

    Here's mine:
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/04/25/relativity-of-time-and-place/

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  19. Jingle25 April 2011 at 12:29

    walk miles in a room...
    wow.

    A++

    you rock, girl.

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  20. Nonna Beach25 April 2011 at 15:04

    Wow, walking through your mind... that was deep...I love it !!!

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  21. Shanae Branham25 April 2011 at 18:21

    Deep...I am glad that I found the time to drop by from g-man's 55.

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  22. Jenny28 April 2011 at 07:38

    Beautiful words.

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  23. haiku love songs28 April 2011 at 18:35

    amazing imagery. beautiful.

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  24. SandyCarlson28 April 2011 at 19:18

    You are an amazing writer. This is some poem!

    Your prompt border comes up at OSI this Sunday. Please send me a poem and/or image I can post!

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