Sunday 6 December 2009

housing that light








that light houses me-

my heart's desire
I am contented
ensconced somewhere
in you

weird it might sound
to some
but for me
it feels just right
this riddle that is you

"that puzzle is a beacon for me"

22 comments:

  1. Getting lost in the puzzle...you have such a way with words ;)

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  2. Now, I must say, Iam housed in this perfect poem

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  3. Great take on the prompt. I think it is special when we connect with someone in this way, riddle or not.

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  4. That is an amazing variation on the prompt. So full of feeling. Beautiful.

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  5. Old Grizz gets lost a lot. I am lost in the lovliness of your words. nice work

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  6. Some of us feeds off the elusiveness of love, and what it mean or does not mean.

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  7. another great work from you!
    beautiful poem indeed!

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  8. the puzzle that is a beacon, that's something to think about!

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  9. You write beautifully. I love the way you combined the two prompts here.

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  10. Wonderful! I love that you separated lighthouse into two words...it made that much more of an impact.

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  11. the heart equals light and a place you are drawn to - to live. Beautiful words.

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  12. Love the way you bring this around - fine circle.

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  13. This expresses true love so well.

    Great poem.

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  14. lovely take dear:)..beautiful words:)

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  15. I love how the heart's desire and the puzzle are both beacons of light.

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  16. kicking the snow
    off my boots–-
    a light in the window

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  17. I am enjoying what everyone is doing with the prompt.
    The light is where we feel it. Good poem

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  18. Surrealistic and naturalistic in five or six breaths. Nice one.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  19. how lovely to have this in another... I love your unique take on Lighthouse!

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  20. Wouldn't it be interesting to live inside a riddle?

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