I declare open war why don't you buy me a car controls vibrate my thigh In the autumn I feel high if you think that's swell I would settle for diamonds as well
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WRITTEN TO THE MELODY OF: Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star
Why does this song make me think of Janice Joplin's song:'Oh Lord, why don't you buy me a Mer-ce-des-Benz? I've been dialing for dollars, I must make amends!'
Yep. I know the feeling. I would not mind getting a car myself. It does not have to be a big luxury model. Even a Skoda would do.
hope you get your car I want one too
ReplyDeleteWell done.. this is good...
ReplyDeleteI hope you get your car too.
ReplyDeleteWhy does this song make me think of Janice Joplin's song:'Oh Lord, why don't you buy me a Mer-ce-des-Benz? I've been dialing for dollars, I must make amends!'
Yep. I know the feeling. I would not mind getting a car myself. It does not have to be a big luxury model. Even a Skoda would do.
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC wk 72'In the Autumn'
...yep, diamonds are good too:@)
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
ReplyDeleteDiamonds and cars... like that!
ReplyDeleteWell written and made me chuckle !
ReplyDeleteIn the past, when I was younger, I would have taken diamonds over a car but now practical me would take the car and hope for diamonds later...
I liked this little ditty and the direction you went in. It was really different which is good in my book, ha. Just great!!
ReplyDeleteI think I'd go for the diamonds! Great take on the prompt!
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Diamonds are nice, but I'd like the car better.
ReplyDeleteha...presents are not a bad thing at all...
ReplyDeleteThis cracked me up!
ReplyDeleteI prefer a car over diamonds--I'm a very practical girl! Nice.
ReplyDeletelove it,
ReplyDeletefun rhyming and
I prefer a car too.
I can do with out the diamonds, but not without a car!! Good choice!!
ReplyDeletehahahahaha.
ReplyDeleteGood luck; I'd be happy with a car or diamonds too.
ReplyDeleteIf you get them, tell me how?
good luck on a new car and some diamonds too this is very cute
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Very cool! I think I'd " settle for diamonds..."
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Love it! Doesn't hurt to ask! Nice one!
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I think I'd take the car...
ReplyDeleteGreat fun, this!
I quite like this. Wny not wish for car, diamonds, and......why stop there!! Nicely crafted.
ReplyDeletePerfect Poem / song - a diamond shines brightly here
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you have been there before ..
:-)
What a different cadence this little poem has.
ReplyDeleteI liked the imagery here.
Neat share! Thank you!