Saturday, 10 September 2011

invasion

you are not here-
you are here
my notebook knows
invisible words form there
emotions jump all over
spilling into my space

you invaded it, 
now refuse to let go
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20 comments:

  1. Brian Miller10 September 2011 at 19:58

    i hope you see the other side of the invasion soon enough...smile.s

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  2. Monkey Man10 September 2011 at 20:04

    Great Sunday 160. Thanks for playing.

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  3. Harshad mehta10 September 2011 at 23:01

    who is holding on? :)

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  4. Ramesh Sood10 September 2011 at 23:29

    I think I have said it in many more words a bit differently ..as usual.. but you amaze me always.. love reading you here..and thanks you fro a prompt that touched somewhere deep..

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  5. Nanka11 September 2011 at 01:43

    Must be very interesting words all over!! Did they march aggressively to invade or had grander plans and still live in hope?? ;)

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  6. Larry, aka The Kid and The Old Goat11 September 2011 at 04:30

    A poem that can have meanings both dark and light.

    Larry

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  7. izzy11 September 2011 at 05:15

    Someone poured wax on your notebook and it scatters feelings willy-nilly!
    Good one! Thanks.

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  8. bodhirose11 September 2011 at 08:30

    That's some invasion you have going on there--very clever.

    Gayle ~

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  9. teric11 September 2011 at 09:31

    Thanks for such a fun prompt.
    Love your words, always so thought-provoking.

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  10. Alice Audrey11 September 2011 at 10:49

    People do have a way of getting under one's skin.

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  11. mareymercy11 September 2011 at 13:09

    Interesting take on the prompt.

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  12. ρομπερτ11 September 2011 at 14:30

    Feels as bit like the impossibility of not breathing. Life. A chance to win. Love the last two lines.

    Please have a good new week.

    daily athens

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  13. Maggie11 September 2011 at 15:42

    I can truely relate...it is the invisible words which can invade a person`s space...

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  14. Evelyn11 September 2011 at 16:39

    our notebooks do know!
    they keep secrets too.

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  15. Morning11 September 2011 at 16:50

    love it.
    smiles.

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  16. Marbles in My Pocket12 September 2011 at 11:21

    Very clever and interesting write. Nicely done!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/

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  17. dakshi13 September 2011 at 05:17

    Lovely...

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  18. Ann LeFlore13 September 2011 at 15:19

    very well done and this can have a meaning in both side of light and dark
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/27/the-island-breeze/

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  19. Cassiopeia Rises14 September 2011 at 12:57

    Ah Tami so true but wonderful. Keep them close.


    Melanie

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  20. Celestial Dreamz16 September 2011 at 08:52

    so true and very beautiful ...

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