Thursday, 10 March 2011

dissolved

let me hold your tiredness
and those troubling thoughts
you have, will disappear.
I will dissolve all those in a chemical
of my own making,
the scent of which will engulf us.
I will add our combined forces
so that no negative thing pitches out

"I will attune it all to flow smoothly between us" 
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42 comments:

  1. moondustwriter10 March 2011 at 19:59

    sounds like a perfect chemistry to me

    :)

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  2. Ramesh Sood10 March 2011 at 20:30

    I gave a standing ovation to this..Gautami..the words..'combined forces' make it all so easy..

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  3. Brian Miller10 March 2011 at 20:41

    smiles. nice bit of chemistry you got going in your 55...

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  4. G-Man11 March 2011 at 01:40

    Gautami...
    Very sensual today.
    Someone would be very lucky to be loved by you.
    Most excellent 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  5. Belinda11 March 2011 at 02:42

    I'm thinking of a good back rub followed by a glass of Malbec. Smiles.

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  6. Ami Mattison11 March 2011 at 03:59

    What a lovely 55! I like the tone and the cadence. And the sensuality of it is great. Really fine writing!

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  7. magiceye11 March 2011 at 07:04

    perfect chemistry :)
    and sensual too

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  8. Akelamalu11 March 2011 at 07:36

    Anything that can dissolve problems has got to be good chemistry!

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  9. Eric 'Bubba' Alder11 March 2011 at 07:38

    Your writings have taken on a nice, sultry quality lately, Gautami. I'm sure there's a reason and I'm sure it's good. :)

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  10. Jeeves11 March 2011 at 07:50

    I like this chemistry......Smooth and soothing

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  11. Jingle11 March 2011 at 08:00

    cool chemical reactions, if not, that's physical reaction..
    thanks for the inspirations.
    love your 55.

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  12. thingy11 March 2011 at 08:19

    Oh, this is so relaxing, Gautami.

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  13. Alice Audrey11 March 2011 at 08:31

    Actually, it sounds like a lot of work to me. But the kind with nice pay offs.

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  14. LKHarris-Kolp11 March 2011 at 09:00

    Very tempting... beautiful!

    ~laurie

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  15. Kim Nelson11 March 2011 at 09:58

    Ohhh... this is wonderful, sensual, inviting, promising.

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  16. flaubert11 March 2011 at 10:35

    Gautami, a lovely sensual piece.
    It is all about chemistry.

    Pamela

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  17. Mama Zen11 March 2011 at 11:45

    So lovely!

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  18. TALON11 March 2011 at 12:49

    Beautiful! Now that's a chemistry that would be life-altering!

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  19. Jannie Funster11 March 2011 at 13:03

    Ooooo, very nice! I do believe we make new chemicals according to the different friend and lover matches we make.

    And, a bit unrelated, I shall make YOUR very own special sidebar button next, and post it on my site! Look for it in the next 1 to 36 hours! whooohoo.

    xoxo

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  20. vivinfrance11 March 2011 at 13:17

    Romantic science - that's a new one, and so delightful

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  21. Stranger11 March 2011 at 13:24

    Sensual and endearing. This is beautiful! I'm still letting the words and the visuals swim in my mind while I imagine the speaker and her audience.

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  22. Elizabeth11 March 2011 at 15:30

    Gautami, although I like your title, I think you might want to call this one The Chemistry of Sensuality. It is smooth and so visual somehow. Great writing,

    Elizabeth

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  23. Steve Isaak11 March 2011 at 15:51

    Smart, loving work.

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  24. irene11 March 2011 at 17:20

    I like the chemical part.

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  25. Joseph Harker11 March 2011 at 20:44

    Very nice!

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  26. Madeleine Begun Kane11 March 2011 at 22:58

    Very well done!

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  27. nan12 March 2011 at 05:52

    When the desire to heal meets chemical . . this is one terrific scientific remedy. Lovely.

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  28. Jeanne Aguilar12 March 2011 at 06:47

    Love that science has measured the differences in chemistry that occur within us when we meet with ones we love...great poem!

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  29. MorningAJ12 March 2011 at 09:51

    They say that love is chemistry. This sounds too good for simple science though.

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  30. Deb12 March 2011 at 12:42

    Dissolution becomes a lovely thing. Nice.

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  31. Kavita12 March 2011 at 13:47

    When Chem mixes in with physics and bio, the magic is beyond historic!

    Nice flow to this one, Gautami..

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  32. Tumblewords:12 March 2011 at 18:20

    The perfect scientist!

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  33. Brenda13 March 2011 at 05:10

    The chemistry of our love for each other. Ahhhh.....

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  34. Tweety13 March 2011 at 11:00

    ah how luck to have someone like that in our lives :) :)

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  35. Mike Patrick13 March 2011 at 12:16

    When the chemistry becomes unstable, is that a bad thing or a good thing?

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  36. ρομπερτ13 March 2011 at 16:21

    What a challenge.


    Please have a good new week.

    daily athens

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  37. ms pie13 March 2011 at 17:18

    wow the waters are calm...

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  38. SandyCarlson13 March 2011 at 19:07

    That is a beautiful promise of love.

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  39. Harshad mehta13 March 2011 at 19:13

    Gautami, not just maths, you are master of chemistry as well! Like the way it is put.

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  40. Tammie Lee15 March 2011 at 14:14

    lovely to be able to attune like this.

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  41. L.A Speedwing15 March 2011 at 14:41

    Lovely, lovely, lovely!! if that's not poetry in words, then I don't know what is.

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  42. kkrige16 March 2011 at 19:13

    You offer much in your gentle way. I enjoy the scent of your pen's scratches

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