Thursday, 31 March 2011

sliding through the gaps

I picked a sensation-
turned it around,
I let it mingle into me.
when the unexpected turn came,
my mind went blank for a while-
but I did not pick any weapons to fight;
choosing to let it go

"I create worlds in my mind
they all fall apart
yet I  go on creating more"
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28 comments:

  1. flaubert31 March 2011 at 12:26

    I love this, Gautami.

    Pamela

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  2. Brian Miller31 March 2011 at 18:07

    sometimes letting go is the best thing to do...

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  3. dustus31 March 2011 at 18:32

    Very perceptual and mentally intriguing 55. I like it!

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  4. G-Man31 March 2011 at 18:55

    Gautami...
    An endless supply of Ideas is in your mind.!
    Loved your 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  5. Jingle31 March 2011 at 19:28

    wise choice,

    letting go may be better at times.
    bless you.
    beautiful 55.

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  6. KB31 March 2011 at 19:53

    Learning to let go is an important lesson.

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  7. Pheromone Girl31 March 2011 at 20:14

    Great imagery. Inspired.

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  8. Monkey Man31 March 2011 at 20:44

    Letting go is huge. Well stated.

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  9. Steve Isaak1 April 2011 at 00:01

    Solid, lifewise verses.

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  10. Andy Sewina1 April 2011 at 03:18

    Hi Gautami,thats amazing! 'cos I just wrote - 'We all create our own worlds, some are more believable than others.' Great minds think alike, sometimes...

    <3

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  11. Eric 'Bubba' Alder1 April 2011 at 07:31

    The only fights we truly win are the ones that never happen.

    Nice 55, Gautami!

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  12. Elizabeth1 April 2011 at 09:05

    Letting go is an absolute must. Otherwise we would have no room to take in more. Good one, Gautami,

    Elizabeth

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  13. Belinda1 April 2011 at 09:05

    Creative and intriguing. I especially like the last sentence. What would we do without imagination.

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  14. MorningAJ1 April 2011 at 09:08

    Oh I like that!

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  15. magiceye1 April 2011 at 10:09

    love this!

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  16. Mama Zen1 April 2011 at 10:20

    Lovely!

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  17. Alice Audrey1 April 2011 at 10:44

    Some of mine don't fall apart. When I'm lucky, I can turn them into books.

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  18. LKHarris-Kolp1 April 2011 at 11:12

    Beautiful on many levels...

    ~laurie

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  19. thingy1 April 2011 at 11:14

    Beautiful, beautiful.

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  20. Joseph Harker1 April 2011 at 13:11

    Very meditative, I like it. :)

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  21. Cathy1 April 2011 at 15:51

    A very good bittersweet poem with the letting go part.

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  22. wordsasunder1 April 2011 at 18:00

    great :)
    your mind will always create, whether you let it or not, so better to just let it do its thing :)

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  23. barbara1 April 2011 at 18:47

    I like this. The unexpected can't be planned for. We don't know the choice until it comes.

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  24. vivinfrance2 April 2011 at 09:25

    Thoughtful and well expressed.

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  25. Tumblewords:2 April 2011 at 20:03

    Excellent - stellar title!

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  26. Wayne Pitchko2 April 2011 at 20:12

    nicely done again Gautami...letting go can be hard.....but sooooooooo good

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  27. lime3 April 2011 at 19:21

    we can choose the worlds we create. it is a discipline to let go. i am learning.

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  28. Tulika Verma6 May 2011 at 11:48

    This is beautiful, Gautami. Read some of your old posts too. Loved them all.

    Here is something I would invite you to read:
    http://deliration.blogspot.com/2011/04/she-is-child-after-all.html

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