Few days absence makes me lag so far behind,that when I read all I missed it boggles my mind,you write so well that when I read,to such a blissful satisfaction does it lead.
What a terrific Sunday 160. Thank you for playing. Be sure to post a comment on my site so others can follow back to you. I would want anyone to miss this.
Welcome to our potluck week 10, a poetry award is assigned upon submission. Old poems are welcome …hurry up, you have 12 hours to go before we are closed. Hope to see you there. Cheers! http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-moods-feelings-and.html
Wonderfully done, I loved it :o)
ReplyDeleteAn unusual but interesting use of the prompt line.
ReplyDeleteSo unique and fun! Perfect!
ReplyDeleteThis one pleases me.
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Quite unique and original for sure! This is microfiction to perfection.
ReplyDeleteVery clever and unexpected use of the prompt.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC wk 28
Pared to the bone here and very interesting....
ReplyDeleteVery creative to see and hear what others do not. "Echoing Parenthesis" is a perfect title!
ReplyDeleteVery creative!!
ReplyDelete? . . . !
ReplyDeleteNice! No question that the weather can affect the muse. Better to have that early November sunshine.
ReplyDeleteGreat play with words, loved reading your poetry!
ReplyDeleteShine of commas make all the difference.. well said Gautami..
ReplyDeletelast line made me smile. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteClever use of the puncuation marks used in your poetry.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant.
ReplyDeleteThis was really fun! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteThat was cleverly done.
ReplyDeleteInteresting :)
ReplyDeletea fresh take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteexcellent
ReplyDeleteSuch an original take on the prompt. I really like this. Of course, being a Southerner, commas are my favorite punctuation mark :) Kat
ReplyDeleteI love the double meaning with punctuation
ReplyDeleteHa!!
Nice 160
mine is here
Loved this. Completely unique.
ReplyDeleteGautami,
ReplyDeleteFew days absence makes me lag so far behind,that when I read all I missed it boggles my mind,you write so well that when I read,to such a blissful satisfaction does it lead.
Take care
Gautami,
ReplyDeleteI really like this.
Pamela
What a terrific Sunday 160. Thank you for playing. Be sure to post a comment on my site so others can follow back to you. I would want anyone to miss this.
ReplyDeletesome wonderful word play...love that is comes to the comma...or pause...
ReplyDeleteComma is very happy.
ReplyDeleteYour punctuation is impeccable!
ReplyDeletePoetic license, creative and filled with charm.
ReplyDeletelovely 160 and more.
cheers,
joanny
Hmn, very very interesting thoughts! And the exclamation marks of cold cold winter to get our attention?
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Very clever take on the prompt!
ReplyDeletehow clever this is the second poem I have read today that incorporated grammar/punctuation lots of fun to read this!
ReplyDeleteoriginal!!
ReplyDeleteThis could be a triple meme - Saturday Centus, FF55, and Sunday 160.
ReplyDeleteThat was me just now. I was trying to put in my name when blogger suddenly swallowed it and post as "anonymous". Blogger hates me.
ReplyDeleteI love the personification of the punctuation marks--so clever. :0)
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how cute! Thanks for visiting mine.
ReplyDeletegolden rays on comma...love it!!
ReplyDeletebrilliant 160.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to our potluck week 10, a poetry award is assigned upon submission.
ReplyDeleteOld poems are welcome …hurry up, you have 12 hours to go before we are closed.
Hope to see you there. Cheers!
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-moods-feelings-and.html
Clever!
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Clever and unexpected! I personally never met a comma I didn't love. Like Kat, I'm from the South.
ReplyDeleteThanks for this post..........cj
Clever piece! Nice personification. I enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeleteHoly Wow! This was lovely. Really, really an interesting use of the prompt.
ReplyDeleteI was fascinated by this link.
Thank you.