A poem well planted.
Nice, the land should seep out of all our words.
absolutely marvelous!wonderful attempt on the prompt!!Happy SShttp://2short2sweet.blogspot.com/2009/05/covertly-photographed.html
Nice one.Best wishesRalf
Mmm. I can smell the dirt.
Very well put!
Not only planted, but firmly rooted, perhaps.I love the 'speed' of this poem - 'the walls, the floor,seeping through that door' - Wonderful words!
I liked this very much too, especially the title, and the shades of brown changing from wet to dry. nice! -Meg
Full of vibrancy and openness!
Yes, this is really good. I will carry it around in my head all day.b
Simply perfect. How do you do it?
Loved the word choices in this one.Mothers in Arms
Excellent use of covert. I especially loved that last stanza. It brings everything full circle. Have a nice night.
oooohhhh...that earthy scent of you. I FEEL that.I have been following you for some time and I have seen this incredible emergence of sophistication in your style. Well done!
nice surprise ending
Sweet and sexy: love the title.
Like that last verse - good one.
Nice read...loved the title too.http://songofsea.wordpress.com/2009/05/24/cupid-strikes/
A poem well planted.
ReplyDeleteNice, the land should seep out of all our words.
ReplyDeleteabsolutely marvelous!
ReplyDeletewonderful attempt on the prompt!!
Happy SS
http://2short2sweet.blogspot.com/2009/05/covertly-photographed.html
Nice one.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes
Ralf
Mmm. I can smell the dirt.
ReplyDeleteVery well put!
ReplyDeleteNot only planted, but firmly rooted, perhaps.
ReplyDeleteI love the 'speed' of this poem - 'the walls, the floor,
seeping through that door' - Wonderful words!
I liked this very much too, especially the title, and the shades of brown changing from wet to dry. nice! -Meg
ReplyDeleteFull of vibrancy and openness!
ReplyDeleteYes, this is really good. I will carry it around in my head all day.
ReplyDeleteb
Simply perfect. How do you do it?
ReplyDeleteLoved the word choices in this one.
ReplyDeleteMothers in Arms
Excellent use of covert. I especially loved that last stanza. It brings everything full circle. Have a nice night.
ReplyDeleteoooohhhh...that earthy scent of you. I FEEL that.
ReplyDeleteI have been following you for some time and I have seen this incredible emergence of sophistication in your style. Well done!
nice surprise ending
ReplyDeleteSweet and sexy: love the title.
ReplyDeleteLike that last verse - good one.
ReplyDeleteNice read...loved the title too.
ReplyDeletehttp://songofsea.wordpress.com/2009/05/24/cupid-strikes/