Wednesday, 13 May 2009

unfocussed

I get so nervous when you bicker at me and then the trajectory of my focus goes awry.

Go check out 3WW..
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23 comments:

  1. Andy Sewina13 May 2009 at 03:43

    Love the Indian Sentence... the last word is such a very clever turn!!

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  2. ThomG13 May 2009 at 05:29

    Sometimes, short is the sweetest. I agree, the last word makes this work.

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  3. MG13 May 2009 at 05:32

    How true.

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  4. anthonynorth13 May 2009 at 07:20

    A nice take.

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  5. Life without Clots13 May 2009 at 07:43

    reminded me of a 12 step slogan..."Do you want to be right, or do you want to be happy?" Good job.

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  6. MichaelO13 May 2009 at 08:33

    I can hardly think with all the yacking in here! ;>)

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  7. Daily Panic13 May 2009 at 08:50

    This happens to me too!

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  8. Angel13 May 2009 at 11:15

    Short and to the point. I like it!

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  9. Brian13 May 2009 at 11:37

    Would it be amiss then if I gazed instead of speaking?

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  10. Tumblewords:13 May 2009 at 12:34

    An awry focus is one of the worst things! :) Neat sentence full of pith.

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  11. RBroeker13 May 2009 at 14:12

    I can feel it. You have to look out - it might be that you can't stop it anymore. Good one.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  12. Unknownwriter and Almost Lover13 May 2009 at 15:26

    interesting and true

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  13. Linda Jacobs13 May 2009 at 18:54

    "Trajectory of my focus" I like that!

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  14. irenet13 May 2009 at 19:19

    pithy and true.

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  15. bellamocha14 May 2009 at 04:50

    Another single sentence- this is terrific! I really like your writing here. Great stuff.
    Bella

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  16. sage14 May 2009 at 08:06

    Great! I use to love doing one sentences 3WWs.

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  17. one more believer14 May 2009 at 13:57

    whadda great line..

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  18. Tammy14 May 2009 at 18:41

    Annoyingly true and then we find a great retort a day later.

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  19. Ann (bunnygirl)14 May 2009 at 20:30

    Very well done.

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  20. maglomaniac15 May 2009 at 01:37

    Short and sweet

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  21. Jeeves17 May 2009 at 06:09

    Thats lot said

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  22. Lion-ess17 May 2009 at 23:33

    I like... Alot!!
    Very precise

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  23. Megha18 May 2009 at 02:43

    Great!! Precise one line :)

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