somehow you unravelled her from all
she held with force of habit. enthralled
she awaits silently in anticipation
of your next move. are her expectations
beyond your control,
to belong to her mind, heart and soul?
Go taste The American Sandwich
if only my heart a octahedron
you could have hidden in the corners
ORGANIC MATTER OF OUR HEARTS
cornered in octahedron's recesses
it would be a great play ground
beautiful.
ReplyDeletethank you for visiting my place often and leaving your words with me. i hope i will manage to come back here more often. there is much beauty in your writing.
blessings
dhyan
Her heart and soul speaks to his mind, in his heart and soul he is the king. She is his Queen, they reign together, but does she see him as a pawn? In the meantime, he explores the octahedron, as it orbits his world.
ReplyDeleteoctrahedron
beautiful--I especially like the first one.
ReplyDeleteI can never make sense of any of the challenges that you participate in, but I'm always aware of one thing: you are an exceptional writer
ReplyDeleteYou're getting deeper and asking more questions. This is good.
ReplyDeleteYour NaiSaiKu is shivery-good.
ReplyDeleteI think I like the first one best, but maybe if I understood the form better... ahh, add that to my list, huh? To finally learn the various forms of poetry and play with them, explore them, inhabit them...
ReplyDeleteTwo successful attempts at these forms! You are getting better and better at them!
ReplyDeleteNice one...
ReplyDelete'Anticipation' definitely boarded the train this week. Thanks for your take on it, reminded me of a bygone era in my life.
ReplyDeleteSweet!
ReplyDeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteGood ones!
ReplyDeleteI tried an American sandwich a while ago.
Gotta get back and try one again. Thanks for the reminder!
Linda
ANGRY AMERICAN SANDWICH