Tuesday, 12 May 2009

swaying ways

cemented in my ways
yet I make you sway
WILL YOU MARRY ME?
swaying to my tune
forever cemented


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that burning heat reaches out, touching me, almost scorches my sensitive skin. Just as suddenly it touches those exhilarating heights, so calming. fire was never so welcome, coming from your inner core anything is.

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17 comments:

  1. Annamari12 May 2009 at 12:30

    ah, yes marraige cementing a relationship...

    and off toppic you are tagged....

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  2. Whitesnake12 May 2009 at 13:32

    I err Hmmm Well now err I sort ta ..........hmmm .....Yep!

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  3. zoya gautam12 May 2009 at 13:53

    .. great poem .. many thanks ..

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  4. JP/deb12 May 2009 at 21:34

    mmmm... love the intensity in this one. peace, jp/deb

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  5. Andy Sewina13 May 2009 at 01:13

    Hi Gautami, forever cemented, now there's a thought!!

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  6. Andy Sewina13 May 2009 at 02:16

    ...btw here is a little something I wrote for you earlier...
    sway

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  7. Deborah Godin13 May 2009 at 08:31

    You come up with the most amazing images! I always enjoy what you write!

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  8. Janice Thomson13 May 2009 at 16:18

    I like your use of 'cemented' - powerful connotations.

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  9. J. Andrew Lockhart13 May 2009 at 21:38

    interesting! :)

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  10. anthonynorth14 May 2009 at 01:28

    So important to have that cement in a relationship.

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  11. sarah14 May 2009 at 02:10

    Fabulous. I love, love, love the first two lines.

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  12. Linda Jacobs14 May 2009 at 15:22

    I like the words you used in this especially cement and sway. Very cool!

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  13. Tumblewords:14 May 2009 at 17:33

    cemented is a word not often used with love/marriage - it rings a new bell! nice...

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  14. Wayne Pitchko14 May 2009 at 19:16

    nicely written....forever "cemented"....hmmmm not sure about that

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  15. Raven's Wing Poetry15 May 2009 at 07:08

    Thought-provoking. I wonder who's cemented and who's swaying.

    -Nicole

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  16. Claire15 May 2009 at 07:25

    succint and powerful

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  17. Lawrence Gladeview18 May 2009 at 18:53

    your brevity's clarity bounces well, i see grey wind blowing. refreshing read.

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