Wow, I really LOVE this one! I have to say it's one of my favorites by you (or anybody). The naisaiku format is particularly good for the subject, don't you think? I really like how you weave the element of time back and forth over the central ghost image. Wonderful!
"AM I A GHOST?"~ -without access to to material facts even the sanctified courts of law would not find it easy to answer that question-(gutsy introspection nonetheless) as for me,i am happy to read ur writings without being 'judgemental'_ but then one does always revere ' The Holy Ghost '..thanks for sharing this..
Wow, I really LOVE this one! I have to say it's one of my favorites by you (or anybody). The naisaiku format is particularly good for the subject, don't you think? I really like how you weave the element of time back and forth over the central ghost image. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteLovely words Gautami, this really takes me there - love the way you question, Am I a Ghost?
ReplyDeleteAh..Lovely. Loved the tweak; It really doth provide the thump to the write..:)
ReplyDeletehow have you been doing? long time no see..
ReplyDeletehope you are well...
Gosh this is good!
ReplyDeletenicely done--the poem worked well in this pattern
ReplyDelete"AM I A GHOST?"~
ReplyDelete-without access to to material facts even the sanctified courts of law would not find it easy to answer that question-(gutsy introspection nonetheless)
as for me,i am happy to read ur writings without being 'judgemental'_
but then one does always revere ' The Holy Ghost '..thanks for sharing this..
Interesting take.
ReplyDeletewonderful !! one of the best i have read on your blog !! (coz i dnt understand many ;) )
ReplyDeletewow.. nice one :)
ReplyDeletewoah i liked this a lot!
ReplyDeleteWas picturing myself.....