Saturday 25 April 2009

watch the movie from the sidewalks

I am walking on the sidewalk
trying to find shade
it is a hot summer day
(I know this line sucks!)
asphalt reflects the day's heat
my calfs are burning
through my sneakers

I could have stayed in
within the realms of my home
under the whirring air conditioner
(ah! what a cool thought!)
but I needed to jolt myself
from my lethargy
(heat wakes you up alright!)

I am walking all alone
non-answerable questions
pelting from the ridges
and valleys of that thing
we all know as our mind
(some times I doubt we do
but I got to stick with convention)

not getting into the heavy
philosophy or semantics
I ought to be direct
asking you how to
follow you to the end
of the Universe
and much, much beyond

"hot asphalt may help me run to you
(and a triple sundae wouldn't come amiss)"

27 comments:

  1. End of universe. There is so much philosophy in this. Nice one here.

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  2. This poem, like others you write, have a wonderful narrative flow to them.

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  3. You like amazing poems. I like your easy writing style. A easy writer, that's what you are. Keep Writing.

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  4. really neat narrative :)

    http://eternitycallsus.blogspot.com/2009/04/i-follow.html

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  5. Very fine, GT: Of course, you know that a triple sundae is the end of the universe, yes? Lots to love in this poem: my calfs are burning / through my sneakers is my favorite...

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  6. Nice esy conversational style...difficult questions.

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  7. Not so sure if a triple sundae would lead you to the end of the Universe , but I am sure it would make u care less about it :P . . .Loved the poem :) . .

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  8. fantasies of a lifetime: you missed the whole point. I am not asking to be lead to the end of Universe. But I do ask you to read it again to understand what I really meant.

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  9. warrier poet: what exactly do you mean by an easy writer?

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  10. nice flow that describes what I just what I was doing

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  11. As the first hot day here today, I can realte, enjoyed this very much Gautami ;)

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  12. A triple sundae is always a good thing - nice post.

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  13. Catch 22,
    Have an ice-cream put on weight and have ta run some more!

    Never ending circles.........

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  14. "non-answerable questions
    pelting from the ridges
    and valleys of that thing
    we all know as our mind"

    I like the ridges and valleys!

    Some heavy questions here but the light touch at the end puts it all into perspective.

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  15. Very thoughtful. I like the image of the triple sundae at the end.

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  16. you write so beautifully!
    :)

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  17. Hi Gautami, there's a virtual triple sundae waiting for you on my blog - all you have to do is follow me - then you can ask!

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  18. im getting close....double sundae...then another double choco sundae after the hockey game...that will put out there somewhere....after my one beer and popcorn....another great read from you

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  19. Well well...With all the hot temperatures,i would simply stay indoors. End of Universe for me will be my BED.

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  20. :)but not as hot (or humid) over here. i am sweating just sitting down. :)

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  21. Sounds like loud thinking between a cool beer and a Gin-Tonic, interesting use of ironic self-reflections.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  22. To the End of the Universe...this line struck me most. This poem is simple yet poignant!


    Keep writing!

    ~ droL
    LITERARY WORKS
    BOOK OF SALAMAT

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  23. indeed i get a jolt when i leave the soft safe confines of my own little world and go out to tramp around in the blistering heat of reality, to be bombarded by all the self-doubt and questions i run up against and from --- forever looking for the restaurant at the end of the universe to find a double chocolate triple sized hot fudge sundae upon which to gorge --- only to discover that reality has made me so sick to my stomach that i need to escape back to my safe place to regroup!!! --- maybe not what you're saying, but it's what i hear when i read this --- great reflection!!!

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  24. i like that you bring us from the mundane to the metaphysical question you seem to be asking and then back again...slipsliding

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  25. Excellent take on the prompts ... love your imagery :)

    Peace, JP/deb

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