Wow, I really LOVE this one! I have to say it's one of my favorites by you (or anybody). The naisaiku format is particularly good for the subject, don't you think? I really like how you weave the element of time back and forth over the central ghost image. Wonderful!
Lovely words Gautami, this really takes me there - love the way you question, Am I a Ghost?
Ah..Lovely. Loved the tweak; It really doth provide the thump to the write..:)
how have you been doing? long time no see..hope you are well...
Gosh this is good!
nicely done--the poem worked well in this pattern
"AM I A GHOST?"~-without access to to material facts even the sanctified courts of law would not find it easy to answer that question-(gutsy introspection nonetheless)as for me,i am happy to read ur writings without being 'judgemental'_but then one does always revere ' The Holy Ghost '..thanks for sharing this..
wonderful !! one of the best i have read on your blog !! (coz i dnt understand many ;) )
wow.. nice one :)
woah i liked this a lot!Was picturing myself.....