sure it will..very nice
you won't have to wait long to see...
loosing grips - ah all the time! It'll be summer soon!
Interesting way of putting it!
Gautami, I like this. I can feel the "dried-up thoughts crackle loudly within my head."
Oh! Love those first lines - what an emotion it gives.
nice words as usual and I agree...great first lines
I especially love that first stanza! Startling imagery.
"will summer breezebring it all back?"I think so.That's what I'm waiting for. :)
Hope summer breeze will lighten things as it sweep by.
Our chaotic thoughts, how well you put it, love this ma petite :)
Lovely, Gautami. :D
I like the sound of "crackle loudly within my head". I'm joining napowrimo, am a bit nervous!
I love this!
"heart lodged in my throatI try to spit it out-it refuses to go either way"nicely said..
This is good. Wish I could write like you.
What a fine poem!
I like it Gautami
I like the edginess quietly lurking within the simplicity :-)