tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post7784686492574978655..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: watch the movie from the sidewalksgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5608752397095904562009-04-26T21:09:00.000-07:002009-04-26T21:09:00.000-07:00Excellent take on the prompts ... love your imager...Excellent take on the prompts ... love your imagery :)<br><br><i>Peace, JP/deb</i>JP/debhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16588554280207421724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2483343312777503802009-04-26T16:39:00.000-07:002009-04-26T16:39:00.000-07:00i like that you bring us from the mundane to the m...i like that you bring us from the mundane to the metaphysical question you seem to be asking and then back again...slipslidingirenethttp://eneri-hot.blogspot.com/2009/04/how-to-die-happily.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51639773347519066292009-04-26T13:01:00.000-07:002009-04-26T13:01:00.000-07:00indeed i get a jolt when i leave the soft safe con...indeed i get a jolt when i leave the soft safe confines of my own little world and go out to tramp around in the blistering heat of reality, to be bombarded by all the self-doubt and questions i run up against and from --- forever looking for the restaurant at the end of the universe to find a double chocolate triple sized hot fudge sundae upon which to gorge --- only to discover that reality has made me so sick to my stomach that i need to escape back to my safe place to regroup!!! --- maybe not what you're saying, but it's what i hear when i read this --- great reflection!!!dannihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14675797306131871129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33046087287173777872009-04-26T05:54:00.000-07:002009-04-26T05:54:00.000-07:00To the End of the Universe...this line struck me m...To the End of the Universe...this line struck me most. This poem is simple yet poignant!<br><br><br>Keep writing!<br><br>~ droL<br><a href="http://literaryworks101.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">LITERARY WORKS</a><br><a href="http://bookofsalamat.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">BOOK OF SALAMAT</a>droLhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14879686977768447515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83351852687041625862009-04-26T01:56:00.000-07:002009-04-26T01:56:00.000-07:00Sounds like loud thinking between a cool beer and ...Sounds like loud thinking between a cool beer and a Gin-Tonic, interesting use of ironic self-reflections. <br><br>Best wishes<br>RalfRBroekerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-1833550154679923062009-04-26T01:38:00.000-07:002009-04-26T01:38:00.000-07:00it's quite coll here, come over :)i follow bei...it's quite coll here, come over :)<br><br><a href="http://elmanohara.blogspot.com/2009/04/i-follow-behind-my-kids.html" rel="nofollow">i follow beind my kids</a>latreehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07521924109825718501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23963273950572368872009-04-25T23:59:00.000-07:002009-04-25T23:59:00.000-07:00:)but not as hot (or humid) over here. i am sweati...<b>:)</b>but not as hot (or humid) over here. i am sweating just sitting down. :)dsnake1http://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74510596501626718892009-04-25T21:49:00.000-07:002009-04-25T21:49:00.000-07:00Well well...With all the hot temperatures,i would ...Well well...With all the hot temperatures,i would simply stay indoors. End of Universe for me will be my BED.songofseahttp://songofsea.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11527905883080332252009-04-25T18:28:00.000-07:002009-04-25T18:28:00.000-07:00im getting close....double sundae...then another d...im getting close....double sundae...then another double choco sundae after the hockey game...that will put out there somewhere....after my one beer and popcorn....another great read from youWayne Pitchkohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90229406296674348262009-04-25T17:15:00.000-07:002009-04-25T17:15:00.000-07:00Hi Gautami, there's a virtual triple sundae wa...Hi Gautami, there's a virtual triple sundae waiting for you on my blog - all you have to do is follow me - then you can ask!SweetTalkingGuy..http://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64380934291841312502009-04-25T15:38:00.000-07:002009-04-25T15:38:00.000-07:00you write so beautifully!:)you write so beautifully!<br>:)Lucyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37629004256838732432009-04-25T14:43:00.000-07:002009-04-25T14:43:00.000-07:00Very thoughtful. I like the image of the triple s...Very thoughtful. I like the image of the triple sundae at the end.Liz at Yips and Howlshttp://www.blog.elizabethenslin.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48314056895134912502009-04-25T14:32:00.000-07:002009-04-25T14:32:00.000-07:00Heavy, but great flow to it.Heavy, but great flow to it.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83239912829744818252009-04-25T14:06:00.000-07:002009-04-25T14:06:00.000-07:00"non-answerable questionspelting from the rid..."non-answerable questions<br>pelting from the ridges <br>and valleys of that thing<br>we all know as our mind"<br><br>I like the ridges and valleys!<br><br>Some heavy questions here but the light touch at the end puts it all into perspective.Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74998338644650706752009-04-25T14:05:00.000-07:002009-04-25T14:05:00.000-07:00Catch 22, Have an ice-cream put on weight and have...Catch 22, <br>Have an ice-cream put on weight and have ta run some more!<br><br>Never ending circles.........Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80672663136023420982009-04-25T12:20:00.000-07:002009-04-25T12:20:00.000-07:00A triple sundae is always a good thing - nice post...A triple sundae is always a good thing - nice post.Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76299299760384589232009-04-25T12:02:00.000-07:002009-04-25T12:02:00.000-07:00As the first hot day here today, I can realte, enj...As the first hot day here today, I can realte, enjoyed this very much Gautami ;)Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48733640026095639342009-04-25T11:54:00.000-07:002009-04-25T11:54:00.000-07:00nice flow that describes what I just what I was do...nice flow that describes what I just what I was doingUnknownwriter and Almost Loverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08591304033835586907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38319498128583988562009-04-25T10:14:00.000-07:002009-04-25T10:14:00.000-07:00warrier poet: what exactly do you mean by an easy ...warrier poet: what exactly do you mean by an easy writer?gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44142520798621482232009-04-25T10:13:00.000-07:002009-04-25T10:13:00.000-07:00fantasies of a lifetime: you missed the whole poin...fantasies of a lifetime: you missed the whole point. I am not asking to be lead to the end of Universe. But I do ask you to read it again to understand what I really meant.gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52617245512365506232009-04-25T10:09:00.000-07:002009-04-25T10:09:00.000-07:00Not so sure if a triple sundae would lead you to t...Not so sure if a triple sundae would lead you to the end of the Universe , but I am sure it would make u care less about it :P . . .Loved the poem :) . .Fantasies of a Lifetimehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08643784245301592548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29433152082421153902009-04-25T08:45:00.000-07:002009-04-25T08:45:00.000-07:00Nice esy conversational style...difficult question...Nice esy conversational style...difficult questions.watermaidhttp://watermaid.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54047338427183952542009-04-25T08:42:00.000-07:002009-04-25T08:42:00.000-07:00Very fine, GT: Of course, you know that a triple s...Very fine, GT: Of course, you know that a triple sundae <i>is</i> the end of the universe, yes? Lots to love in this poem: <i>my calfs are burning / through my sneakers</i> is my favorite...murat11http://www.blogger.com/profile/00663364407992075130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76532307166981029922009-04-25T08:26:00.000-07:002009-04-25T08:26:00.000-07:00really neat narrative :)http://eternitycallsus.blo...really neat narrative :)<br><br>http://eternitycallsus.blogspot.com/2009/04/i-follow.htmlamericanising desihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08119618514833002141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55749776353717684992009-04-25T06:43:00.000-07:002009-04-25T06:43:00.000-07:00You like amazing poems. I like your easy writing s...You like amazing poems. I like your easy writing style. A easy writer, that's what you are. Keep Writing.warrior Poethttp://shaikzakeerhussain.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com