Wednesday, 15 June 2011

whispering ocean

















trapped in it
whispers of air
prefer to stay put
rivulets of thready thought
grip me 
I want to escape
into the endless ocean

"isolated, I let strawberry tickle me
while storms breaks in within,
maybe I prefer to be within the stones of time"
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20 comments:

  1. Cynthia15 June 2011 at 10:49

    I find your words soothing.

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  2. Ren15 June 2011 at 12:43

    Very calming.
    Lovely use of the prompts.

    *I've nominated you for a blogger award*
    http://renthewriter.blogspot.com/2011/06/gobsmacked-blogger-award.html

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  3. Kim Nelson15 June 2011 at 13:13

    Great result from combining the two prompts!
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/15/blessed-connection/

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  4. Fear Not the Darkness but What lies Within15 June 2011 at 16:03

    I love this it really calls us to the ocean.

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  5. Mad Kane15 June 2011 at 16:59

    Sad and lovely.
    Mad Kane

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  6. creativeintrospection15 June 2011 at 17:00

    interesting take on sound and words. Like the way they played each other. Thank you for sharing it.

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  7. Old Altonian16 June 2011 at 00:30

    Very good - one can smell the ozone and the sea-weed.

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  8. sage16 June 2011 at 07:27

    Both poems are very nice--I especially like the first. I am mostly posting here this summer: http://jeff-ridingrails.blogspot.com/ Check out my latest post about a Buddhist and a Hindu temple in Indonesia

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  9. A Kwee Life16 June 2011 at 18:18

    I love the endless ocean. Very lovely.

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  10. Tess Kincaid17 June 2011 at 06:51

    I love the little strawberry addendum. It conjures up strawberry ice cream in my mind.

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  11. Jingle18 June 2011 at 02:56

    wish for the sea seeing,
    wow.

    you have captured the desire of a shell stuck on beach perfectly.
    :)

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  12. the critics19 June 2011 at 08:13

    wonderfully written :0

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  13. cj Schlottman19 June 2011 at 10:08

    Ah, the powers of the oceans of the world. Beautifully stated.

    Namaste..........cj

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  14. Sue19 June 2011 at 10:39

    This has a lovely serenity to it.

    =)

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  15. Dazee Dreamer19 June 2011 at 16:51

    wow. that was beautiful

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  16. The Woodswoman20 June 2011 at 10:40

    Being a water person, found this intrigingly lovely.

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  17. Jo22 June 2011 at 14:22

    beautifully written

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  18. jeff campbell23 June 2011 at 09:12

    Very nice ;-) Looking at that shell and reading your poem...sublime...Peace and blessings

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  19. Jenny24 June 2011 at 17:58

    That picture was the perfect illustration for these lovely words.

    The ebb and flow of your word crafting always pulls me in...

    ...and then releases me...

    ...and I am richer for having been priviledged to read your words.

    Thank you.

    A+

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  20. Nonna Beach25 June 2011 at 08:33

    Simply gorgeous prose...Excellent..."rivulets of thready thought" Love that !!!

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