Dear Guatami: Yes this is deep! Will try to be more 3d!
I watch acrid summer paving a way for you
Sensing being part of a dimension shift soon to be what with the flat aspect of past personae stamped out and all. As you recreate from the abundant light a radiating dimensional 360 turn it around. Totally onto this!
Love the light touch of words that go so deep and say so much. As usual, you have created a profound statement with seeming ease.This is beautiful Gautami,
it's strong end "acrid summer/pavid a way for you". Like :)
ReplyDeleteQuite a longing within this 160. Thanks for playing.
ReplyDeletebeautiful.
ReplyDeletebless your Sunday.
I love "acrid summer".
ReplyDeleteSuch beautiful words!
ReplyDeleteI love how you heap them all together!
evocative imagery
ReplyDeleteDear Guatami: Yes this is deep! Will try to be more 3d!
ReplyDeleteI watch acrid summer
paving a way for you
Sensing being part of a dimension shift soon to be what with the flat aspect of past personae stamped out and all. As you recreate from the abundant light a radiating dimensional 360 turn it around. Totally onto this!
acrid summer ... paving a way for you .... very beautiful.
ReplyDelete"Acrid summer" is fabulous deep and powerful poem
ReplyDeleteWoW - a true slice of observational thought. Bravo.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful image, filled with yearning. I love this piece.
ReplyDeleteLove the light touch of words that go so deep and say so much. As usual, you have created a profound statement with seeming ease.This is beautiful Gautami,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Like everyone's saying, that last image of summer paving the way is killer. Short and sweet!
ReplyDeleteThe whole poem moves. Well done.
ReplyDeleteSuccinct piece of observation, Gautami.
ReplyDeletePamela
everyone has said it all....thnaks for this Gautami
ReplyDeleteGreat capture!
ReplyDeleteWalking towards the light sounds good to me. ♥
ReplyDeletea beautiful spiritual touch to this poem.
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