Monday, 20 June 2011

fruits dance on the walls

picture credit: Chris Galford














in a blind alley
I find fruits
dancing with each other
drinking their health
butterfly steps out
when bees sting
I write graffiti
on walls

"do knock it down"
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20 comments:

  1. A Daft Scots Lass20 June 2011 at 02:50

    Very jolly.

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  2. dustus20 June 2011 at 05:52

    Concise and revealing. Much life in your short poem—from revelry to birds and bees.

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  3. upinthecosmos20 June 2011 at 09:03

    I love the picture and I think we can all learn from those fruits and veggies getting along:-)

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  4. Whitesnake20 June 2011 at 13:40

    It does have punch!

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  5. Henry Clemmons20 June 2011 at 19:51

    I like it. Short n to the point. Colorful and entertaining.

    http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/my-andela.html

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  6. Jingle21 June 2011 at 01:44

    glad to see fruits dance,
    Cheers.

    well done,

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  7. Fiducia21 June 2011 at 07:18

    Shows oneness even in fruits and veggies....colorful...artistic...and powerful theme!

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  8. Laurie Kolp21 June 2011 at 14:10

    Yummy and begging for more...

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  9. Nara Malone21 June 2011 at 15:08

    I'd like to find fruit in a blind alley :)

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  10. beccagivens21 June 2011 at 20:48

    Oh how fun!! :-)

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  11. mindlovemisery21 June 2011 at 23:00

    I love "Blind alley" this is a lovely slice of life poem beautifully done

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  12. imnotaverse22 June 2011 at 01:32

    Something a little different for you, I think. Nicely done.

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  13. pr91022 June 2011 at 11:19

    very nice, fun, and imaginative! made me cheered....!

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  14. magiceye23 June 2011 at 20:56

    fruit punch!!
    lovely!!

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  15. Jingle Poetry24 June 2011 at 13:00

    pleasant one.

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  16. Jingle Poetry24 June 2011 at 13:01

    Jingle appreciates your support to our poetry potluck.
    Our week 41 Theme is: Saints, Monks, and Meditations,
    Yet, old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome… ;)
    Always, your poetry is sunshine to us!
    Looking forward to seeing U on Sunday, 8pm or later.
    Stay Blessed,
    Love and hugs.
    xoxox

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  17. patcegan24 June 2011 at 14:55

    Charming poem...brought a smile to me. Like your live visitors feed, too. I had never seen that before. Hugs, pat

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  18. Priyanka Bhowmick24 June 2011 at 20:31

    very delightful poem!!

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  19. Rek25 June 2011 at 01:03

    Enjoyable and fun...

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  20. swapnap26 June 2011 at 18:13

    title made me smile, but you always have let your words talk. Good one.

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