Saturday, 28 May 2011

jingling chains

turquoise blue stones on my wrist
are at home
I jingle silvers chains that hold them
sheen of green peeps through blue
when a butterfly flutters nearby
I let it sit on my bracelet
an antique, one of the legacy of heroes maybe
those heroes who were really sea pirates

"let the guitar play you"
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23 comments:

  1. Christine28 May 2011 at 10:18

    enjoyed all the imagery here,
    blue turquoise, silver chains, butterfly flutters.

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  2. jfb5728 May 2011 at 11:33

    Beautiful use of imagery!

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  3. Judie28 May 2011 at 11:35

    A very interesting take on the prompt!

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  4. Sue28 May 2011 at 13:04

    Colorful images here.

    =)

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  5. G-Man28 May 2011 at 19:11

    Gautami...
    I Love turqoise.
    I Loved your 55.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Sunday...G

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  6. Jingle29 May 2011 at 11:29

    stunning.

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  7. jeff campbell29 May 2011 at 13:18

    So very interesting and unexpected ;-) Peace and blessings

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  8. Keda30 May 2011 at 03:55

    Thanks so much for coming by my site. I see you ahve a poetry site and I would like to invite you to visit my site www.poetrytalkingtotrees.blogspot.com. It is more of a creative writing site, I dabble in it all.

    Anyway - back to you:

    THis is such a fun post, loved the imagery, the sounds, the colours, the feelings, the visions - everything that it brought up was very vivid. Lovely work.

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  9. Nonna Beach30 May 2011 at 06:40

    A novel and lovely vision, chock full of beautiful textures...very enjoyable...excellent job !

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  10. Kathe W.30 May 2011 at 08:46

    love all the images!

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  11. Alice Audrey30 May 2011 at 09:13

    I like the image of a butterfly landing on old pirate booty.

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  12. Tgoette30 May 2011 at 10:21

    Lovely verse! Great job!

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  13. MorningAJ31 May 2011 at 01:40

    What pretty images. I love the idea of owning some pirate-stolen jewellery!

    (Romantic old pirates - not the sort you get these days!)

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  14. Linda Jacobs31 May 2011 at 04:31

    "let the guitar play you" is so unexpected that it's perfect! I really like this!

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  15. Mary31 May 2011 at 04:35

    Beautifully composed!

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  16. Isabel31 May 2011 at 05:02

    wonderful!

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  17. mindlovemisery31 May 2011 at 05:33

    I love the vibrancy of the poem and the rhythm, it was very sensory

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  18. Amanda31 May 2011 at 05:51

    Cudos! Not only it's beautiful, it managed to combine so many prompts. *envy* :)

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  19. Linc31 May 2011 at 07:05

    Very nice, very vivid!

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  20. Jangle31 May 2011 at 19:38

    Jingle: No wonder you find this stunning. I was stunned just to see a "Jingle" commenting on this jingle.

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  21. lunawitch151 June 2011 at 10:44

    so vivid and striking images here . i thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

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  22. cj Schlottman1 June 2011 at 17:53

    What beautiful images you create with this lovely post!

    Namaste..........cj

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  23. Jenny11 June 2011 at 06:22

    What beautiful and ethereal imagery you painted here.

    This writing was like a spell.

    Really compelling and lovely.

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