Friday, 4 February 2011

sinning through the skin

totally relaxed, I cling to you
my arms creep around you
but you clutch me tight
knowing I need that aftermath
our heightened senses linger in the room
golden hue of fantasy has become a reality
I again touch your glistening skin
you steal away my shallow breath

"I stay alive breathing through your skin"


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14 comments:

  1. Brian Miller4 February 2011 at 09:41

    very sensual piece...wrapped in the skin of that other....

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  2. Eric 'Bubba' Alder4 February 2011 at 09:42

    I've noticed lately that your writing sounds like a woman in love, Gautami. The thought makes me smile - I hope it's true! :)

    A sweet, tender 55.

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  3. Monkey Man4 February 2011 at 11:32

    Whew. Let me catch my breath. Great passionate 55.

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  4. Margaret Bednar4 February 2011 at 12:28

    Yes, full of passion! And sounds like an understanding lover to me! :)

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  5. Willow4 February 2011 at 13:24

    Whew, from me too, very hot, beautiful. Your last line incredible.

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  6. G-Man4 February 2011 at 18:16

    Gautami...
    WOW!!!!
    This was very personal and sensual.
    Top Quality writing My Friend.
    I Loved your 55.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  7. Bone4 February 2011 at 21:40

    Liked the use of aftermath. Never heard it put that way. Creative.

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  8. Ramesh Sood5 February 2011 at 08:11

    Sinning through...? I mean you are ending with the word 'Breathing through..' aren't they opposites...I am confused.. But poem..excellent..can's say anything on such a piece of pure passion..

    Would love you to visit for OSI tomorrow . it would be my 200th post.. I haven't forgotten what you call them.. dancing verses..wow!!!

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  9. theaccidentalnovelist5 February 2011 at 11:46

    whew, sexy. ;-)

    btw - someone wrote a comment on my blog asking how to subscribe to YOUR blog by way of e-mail. I made some suggestions but I don't know what client they use. I didn't see a "subscribe by e-mail" option here.

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  10. Dulce5 February 2011 at 15:24

    This is really sensual and beautiful... oh I especially love that title... it says so much
    Great poem
    D.

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  11. gautami tripathy5 February 2011 at 18:35

    theaccidentalnovelist:

    I added that subscription by email button. Thanks for letting me know. I didn't realize that I don't have it.

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  12. Strummed Words7 February 2011 at 07:00

    I like the sensuality of it.

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  13. Alice Audrey7 February 2011 at 07:53

    Wonderful, sweet moment. Good one, Gautami.

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  14. Travis Cody8 February 2011 at 19:51

    Very sensual. Well done.

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