Sunday, 13 February 2011

demise

ball of yarn rolls into corner
tired and sad
it dislikes being drawn into patterns
against its will
in those it sees its demise
reflected in incandescent light
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19 comments:

  1. teric13 February 2011 at 09:49

    You make two totally different words, yarn and incandescent, a joy to roll together.

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  2. Mama Zen13 February 2011 at 10:07

    Gorgeous!

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  3. Monkey Man13 February 2011 at 10:09

    Bringing a ball of yarn to life...I love that. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.

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  4. Rushabhh Gandhi13 February 2011 at 10:40

    Hmmm.. inner thinking begins when people like you starting putting your thoughts in to words! :)

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  5. Ralf Bröker13 February 2011 at 10:54

    So many iSounds, so much power.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  6. Brian Miller13 February 2011 at 12:59

    against its will...i guess nothing likes that...

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  7. Alice Audrey13 February 2011 at 13:37

    You can't create without destroying.

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  8. Fay's Too13 February 2011 at 14:49

    Poor ball of yarn. I'd always thought the yarn was thrilled to attain its destiny. Perhaps your yarn is blue.

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  9. Kavita13 February 2011 at 16:15

    Ouch!! Seriously, if a ball of yarn were to ever speak, this is probably what it would say! What a thoughtful 160, Gautami... so very creative!

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  10. Tammie13 February 2011 at 16:55

    a wonderfully creative take, i love it's depth!

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  11. Ramesh Sood14 February 2011 at 03:52

    Good one..this!!!

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  12. Swapna John14 February 2011 at 06:21

    You gave life to a ball of yarn. Fantastic work

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  13. Pam14 February 2011 at 16:39

    I love your image of the yarn being so very sad about being forced into something it isn't.

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  14. kkrige15 February 2011 at 07:13

    I think that Audrey has something there. New life in different form to be had.

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  15. Gerry/Strummed Words15 February 2011 at 08:40

    That ball of yard reflects us
    in the incandescent light. Very nice.

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  16. bodhirose15 February 2011 at 09:11

    I feel that ball of yarn's sorrow--it doesn't have a say as to what it will be turned into. Not fair!

    Creative, Gautami.

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  17. SandyCarlson15 February 2011 at 18:03

    So know that feeling! Well said. Thank you.

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  18. zoya gautam16 February 2011 at 10:08

    hi gautami,

    structure ,pattern, thought & outcome -

    the way u approach poetry is probably not mathematical !

    perhaps that is the power of the unknown

    all the best with ur good work ..

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  19. Patti16 February 2011 at 13:29

    can picture it...the yarn's demise indeed- nicely done!

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