Thursday 15 March 2007

Aphasia...Poetry Thursday

This week optional idea was defined.

That is selecting a word and writing a poem defining it. I had done that before. This poem of mine is from the archives. I had written it in May 2006. I usually write a new poem for poetry thursday. As I have time constraints, I post this here now. If I do write another poem, I will post that too.
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Aphasia

thumping words
hammering
in my mind.
wanting an outlet
at the doorway of fate
asking for forbearance

aphasia.

cognizance’s end
elucidation's catastrophe
totality in the doldrums
stupefied, abeyant
i wait....

aphasia
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28 comments:

  1. Hello, guatamy!
    This poem is very good, thank you
    have nice week

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  2. Very strong word, it seems almost dreadful.

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  3. I like how all the lines build up a sense of suspense that the end is near.

    Rose

    xo

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  4. You make great use of words here. The larger more complicated words in the 2nd stanza are a direct 'challenge' almost, or a polar opposite of what Aphasia is. Maybe that was your intention, I don't know.
    I like the structure and flow. Nice work.

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  5. Very strong words filled with desperation. Great poem.
    Thank you.

    Yvonne

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  6. felt so strong, maybe because of the defining words,.

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  7. gautami,
    Short, effective, and right to the point.
    What an extremely frustrating state it must be to be aphasic.
    rel

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  8. Fits well the theme. I used to think Aphasia sounded like it should be a 19th century lady's name.

    Thanks for visiting.

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  9. Excellent poem, Gautami... I felt that sense of frustration "at the doorway of fate
    asking for forbearance"
    Hope your days get easier from here on out...

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  10. that is soooo strong. have had a personal experience with aphasia. super fine expression... you rawk

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  11. This is sooooo nice....I had to read it a few times.
    Thanks for visting my blog.
    Keep well:)

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  12. Abeyant, I wait...Great line. I like.

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  13. Very powerful and a very sad condition.

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  14. Thanks David, dewyknickers,beaman,polona,Yvonne,ghost, rel, norma, regina, kindness, etain, don and pat.

    brian: it is a dreadful state to be in.

    I wrote it almost a year back.

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  15. It is a great poem, that seems underlined with foreboding.

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  16. I have seen people with aphasia. It is terrible. Being all bottled up with no language. Nice poem.

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  17. The poem describes the word beautifully.

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  18. This is my favorite PT poem this week. The pace of it is perfect, the words dance off my tongue.

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  19. Hi Gautami--

    Have you read Oliver Sacks' books on neurological deficit? Great food for poems there...

    Sarah

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  20. tara: I wrote it some months back. I found the word and the poem flowed as I have seen someone go through this state.

    sarala: so you know what it means.

    chiefbiscuit: thanks!

    writerwoman: I appreciate that! thanks!

    miss print: I will chk him out, thanks!

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  21. Thanks for you visit.
    Well done here. 'thumping words...wanting an outlet' seems like it could also be a difficulty we poets sometimes experience. (Not to make light of those who actually have the condition of aphasia.)

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  22. Dear Aphasian Asian,
    You don't actually seem to have a true case of Aphasia since you managed to creatively express yourself.
    Very clever.

    I pronounce you cured.
    Write two poems and call me in the morning.

    Sincerely,
    Dr. Escapeons

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  23. I enjoyed that. Now I have to go dig up the meaning of aphasia, for I know it can't be what I think it is:

    "If you provoke me I won't turn away, aphasia and fight."

    It's got to be something else.

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  24. ron: I know what you mean by that. We writers do go through that.

    homo escapeons: You do have a point there, sir! But I am still trying to find the point...I think you need to write poetry to loosen you up. Write one on the moon.

    rethabile: Glad you liked. I regard you as one of the best poets in the blog world.

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  25. I love the words in this poem and its rhythm.

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  26. It's nice to get an excuse once in a while to post something from the archives....

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  27. Thanks Jone.

    crafty: sometime we do need to search our archives. Looking back I see a few forgotten pieces. Thanks!

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