Tuesday 13 March 2007

Journey within the mind....Sunday Scribblings

Sunday Scribblings prompt was dream journey. Infact on Sunday I was on a real journey. Read the the previous post. I wrote this a short while back as this has been playing in my mind. Again a terza rima. It is tuesday but I still post it as sunday scribblings...:D

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Journey within the mind

this is something I do not recognize,
although I am taken over by
intense feeling, none to very wise.

thoughts touching you, flying to the sky
rebounding back to me. In trepidation
I accept, look unseeingly with a sigh.

enormity of it registers in conclusion;
leaving me with feelings inexpressible-
my tears streaming with exclusion

of unfathomable emotions, non-analyzable.
journey within my mind continues
taking me to places which feel stable.

in my dreams, in all glory, all its hues-
peace pervading; my mind awaits you.

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26 comments:

  1. amazing...the desires of the heart remain inside, forever.

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  2. all its hues-
    peace pervading; my mind awaits you...
    So glad you did your scrbble - just beautiful Guatami
    Thanks for sharing,
    Frances

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  3. It will always amaze me, your ability with words and expressing feelings

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  4. Hi,
    I'm glad something told me to visit your site even though I was here yesterday, to see if you posted for Sun. Scribs.

    Wondefully expressing dreams,longings, and hopes of the heart.

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  5. Mind play is a amazing thing, ghost.....

    frances: thanks. Isn't it what we all desire?

    Inconsequential: That is a terza rima. For now I am hooked to those...

    Whitesnake: Words are what I got...

    gel: thanks. I visited you and like what you wrote. I will link you too.

    kai: thanks girl.

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  6. Thanks for your visit. Wow, your poem certainly shows how wondrous a mind can be!

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  7. Well done! Loved the inner journey with its many subtle turns and twists.

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  8. Thanks for stopping by. I like your poem, it really echoes how I feel at times.

    Rose

    xo

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  9. chiefbiscuit,don and dewyknickers: thanks. Mind does take us on a journey.

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  10. taking me to places which feel stable.
    I love that line. I would love to go to a place like that right about now.

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  11. A dream Journey
    In my opinion
    Would not cater to
    Teenyboppers
    or their minions (you try rhyming with "opinion")

    It would feature
    rockin' tunes
    and screaming solos
    for fans in t-shirts
    instead of polos

    ;-)

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  12. Gautami
    you have such a wonderful knack for expressing yourself!
    This is excellent...lovely!

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  13. we can dream (whether they come true or not) and thats the most beautiful thing abt life.

    Keshi.

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  14. What a lovely poem. I just read about your journey in the previous post, too - which sounded like a peaceful journey as well.

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  15. journeys to ajmer and the mind
    you are a well-travelled lady :)
    cheers

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  16. Thanks writer woman, magiceye, kristen, , margie, keshi, tinker, andrew nd floots! I appreciate your opinions.

    pug: You did well. Actually I am not much into rhymed verses unless I write structured poetry.

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  17. Thanks for commenting on my blog. I have always enjoyed reading yours as well, although I am terrible at posting comments! Journeys of the heart and mind can be very powerful things...

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  18. Wonderful!

    I continued the story I began a few weeks ago. You can read it here: "Why Did I Say 'Yes'?"

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  19. I really like this poem - the longing and hopefulness - wonderful!

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