Wednesday 9 November 2005

Omen

‘Twas but a year ago, the moon shining bright,
(etched in my mind, so well);
strolled with my loved one in the orange light,
our voices intermingling like twinkling bells

Suddenly the moon grew dull.
My love seemed to have sprouted wings;
he appeared a face of a smirking skull
What I felt in my heart was a ghastly thing

Fantasy was it? For my love lay still
within my arms, his eyes aglow;
wondering why my lips were chilled.
Silently I pulled him closer, kissing him so

One year gone, the moon still bright.
Too bright, like a ghost of woe;
standing by a newly dug grave tonight
with a wrecked heart……….its bizarre you know.

7 comments:

  1. Now that is some thing I can relate to ... :) Reminds me of days long gone but not forgotten. Beautifully written.

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  2. really well framed.. it's neat. i loved these...

    Fantasy was it? For my love lay still
    within my arms, his eyes aglow;
    wondering why my lips were chilled.
    Silently I pulled him closer, kissing him so


    Cheers,
    Rohit. keep smiling :)

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  3. Wow...Touched straight here(* pointing to My heart* )wonderful...

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  4. Mama Mia! A poet whose fav is Feynman! cool.

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  5. fauzan: Thanks.

    I hope you got over the sad memories!

    Rohit: Well, I am trying my best to be a poetess! But all I write is sad stuff! Thanks!

    demi goddezz: Me touched too by you!

    jinguchakka: :) Yeah I love Physics!

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  6. Thanks much for dropping by..gr8 place u have here. Thoughts penned here moves me..

    will b back for more :)

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  7. Thanks Φ,

    Will look forward to your kind words!

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