I drink on lifein the brightnessof the day.And ponder over itin the darknessof the nightThere is something so haunting and mysterious about this part. Can't put a finger on it but I like it! Muchos Gracias for your comments :) I took the liberty to adding you to my "Watched Blogs" list. Hope it's all cool with you. Keep up the good work.
I feel this one...I live my life and then sit up all night reliving it. Trying to figure out what I could have done better.
Applause !The best line was -"I drink on life in the brightness of the day." - Awesome....
Thanks fauzan. It was spur of a moment writing!No I don't mind you adding me to your Watched list!Deb: Thanks for relating to it. But learning from our mistakes is what life is all about.just a human: Thanks for the applause.
Nice, Gautami! I like the positive 'use' [damn, don't like this word] of both the day and night... May you stay high on life. :)
xcellent imagery..am moved
Thanks Preeti.Why do we always think of Day as positive and night nagative? Hence I wrote this in a positive note for both. I feel that way.
Î¦ , Thanx. Just plain simple verse!