Ahh! The undercurrent's very palpable Gautami. Poignant. :)
how simply u wrote it ..... nice . And its a dificult time realyy .. if one goes through it .. realy hard. Nice story .
Are you practicing for some 55 words story cometition? Most of the posts here currently look like that! :p
Thanks Preeti........you are being kind!Thanks anuj, simply told stories are read and remembered.Yes nayan, I am trying my hands at 55 word stories. Short stories are difficult to write as they have to convey a lot is as little words! No competition though.
Nice story..n simply put..n nice poem u posted on mine:)
I mean Gautami - how else can somebody write on this. Impressive, paramount - this is good stuff, are you documenting this? You can actually publish commercially someday. You entire collection - really creative writing.Cheers
Thanks j a h,I am really very new to writing. So have not given much thought to publishing. Maybe I should start by sending those to magazines etc...Thanks for the encouragement...friend..Smiles,
The brevity of the piece does not take away the depth conveyed in this piece.
I thought you weren't updating your blog until I took a closer look. You have a compilation of 55 worders here...!For this one, I say I feel sorry for the guy. How does he do it? Everyday...!
Thanks Jackal,I feel we can fit in too much in too little.Thanks f f, I have been and will continue to update my blog.