Tuesday 22 November 2005

Finally.....55 words story......contd from the previous one....

“Five years, isn’t it?”

“Yes.” Five years, two months, 7 days and 10 hours.

“How have you been?”

“Ok.”

“See you around.”

“Ok.” Her heart was breaking apart.

“Momma?” A little boy came running.

“ Is he mine?”

“Yes.”

“Will you marry me?”

“I will.”

They were in each other’s arms, kissing as never before.


14 comments:

  1. WO... love story good ending !!

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  2. Amazing! Keep writing, Gautami.

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  3. Thanks Nayan,Darling and Flickering flame.

    Wanted to write a love story in shortest of words!

    Did I succeed?

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  4. You sure did... but eh.. don't u think this story is a depicting 'him' a bit unromantic, while 'she' has all the best thoughts? ;)

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  5. Hmmm.. a little bit though :)

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  6. Men do not express their feelings! They take a lot of time to open up to emotions.

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  7. Amazing!
    Sigh! Wish most of the people had your wisdom.

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  8. I would say this is one of the best 55 word stories ive read on the blogosphere recently...

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  9. Thanks Nayan...:)

    Thanks Ghost.....A love story is not what most guys like!

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  10. Me too! But life is not always as we want it to be....

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