Sunday, 2 January 2011

regressive progress

progress gets regressed
but I digress
not one iota from pages
I could decipher.
writing with invisible ink
you coded it too
much precautions
totally useless
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17 comments:

  1. jaerose2 January 2011 at 06:12

    Happy New Year to you Gautami - you've started off with yet another enigmatic and powerful piece which is really making me think. I can feel the strength of the person under that invisible ink..Jae

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  2. annell2 January 2011 at 06:27

    The progress we have known in our lives, is regression, for sure.

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  3. Understanding Alice2 January 2011 at 06:41

    i liked this, it had the feel of going round in ever smaller circles - regressive indeed :)

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  4. Jingle2 January 2011 at 09:07

    lovely put progress.
    smart 160.
    happy 2011.

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  5. Alice Audrey2 January 2011 at 09:33

    Too much precaution and no one will understand.

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  6. gs batty2 January 2011 at 09:37

    creative souls such as yours should never be incumbered by invisible ink. Let it all hang out.

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  7. Mama Zen2 January 2011 at 10:05

    Very cool!

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  8. Monkey Man2 January 2011 at 10:06

    Strong message. Thanks for being a part of the first Sunday 160's of the New Year.

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  9. quilly2 January 2011 at 13:47

    It does take to people TRYING in order to communicate, doesn't it?

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  10. Bill2 January 2011 at 14:32

    New Year's day
    a new path leading
    to the same place

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  11. moondustwriter2 January 2011 at 15:18

    Glad this isnt written in invisible text.

    Best to you this year

    Moonie smiles

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  12. Lyn2 January 2011 at 17:03

    I agree..much precaution..sort of useless!! Ready to just fly!!Have a great New Year!!

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  13. Ramesh Sood3 January 2011 at 05:00

    I felt good reading it.. because it helped me.. Thanks Gautami..

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  14. Strummed Words3 January 2011 at 08:01

    Too much coding -- I know what you mean, I think! Happy New Year of poetry writing!

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  15. davidearle3 January 2011 at 08:13

    there are pages in the notebook just like that!

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  16. sharplittlepencil3 January 2011 at 12:19

    Gautami, Happy New Year! Great start. The invisible ink, the code... signs of that creative frustration we all experience from time to time... at least that's what I got from it.

    Your poetry is such that there can be many meanings derived, and that's part of the beauty of your writing. I'm pretty literal, but you have the knack for the ethereal.

    Here's mine...
    http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/moving-last-chance-prompt/

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  17. chrisd4 January 2011 at 16:30

    Too much precaution-totally useless.

    I never thought of that. I'll be thinking about that because frankly, I'm all about caution.

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