Sunday, 30 January 2011

is it an illusion?

it is the same pearl
I lost in your mouth
you rolled it in your tongue
made it disappear
I did not see it until today

you keep it safe,
I only want your tongue
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21 comments:

  1. Kenia Cris30 January 2011 at 06:30

    =)

    Dainty! I liked it a lot and it made me smile.

    Cheers. =*

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  2. jaerose30 January 2011 at 06:51

    What a sensual piece..charming, fun and just, well, lovely..Jae

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  3. Alice Audrey30 January 2011 at 09:21

    That must be some kiss!

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  4. Mama Zen30 January 2011 at 11:18

    Nicely done!

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  5. WarmSunshine30 January 2011 at 12:10

    reminds me of love making and french kisses some how... oolala!!

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  6. Wendy30 January 2011 at 12:10

    ooh la la. Very erotic. By virtue of conjuring up a pearl held in the mouth, the reader brings in all the accompanying baggage of the image....the treasure, how far one has to dive in order to get said treasure, and that delicacy and deftness with which we have to handle the shell in order to get the pearl.

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  7. flaubert30 January 2011 at 13:14

    Very sensuous piece Gautami:)
    Pamela

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  8. lightverse30 January 2011 at 13:45

    This was so sensual and sensuous and lush. What an incredible kiss,

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  9. Brian Miller30 January 2011 at 14:02

    smoking 160...sensual perfection...

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  10. Monkey Man30 January 2011 at 14:34

    Great Sunday 160. Thanks again for playing our little word game and bringing your extraordinary talent to it.

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  11. Tracey30 January 2011 at 15:46

    Whew! Fanning myself! (LOL!) Perfect.

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  12. Tracey30 January 2011 at 15:47

    PS: Wendy, your comment makes me continue to fan myself (ha!)

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  13. Jinksy31 January 2011 at 08:06

    Sheesh! And all that from a photo of a hairy ape?! Did I miss something?

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  14. jabblog31 January 2011 at 08:14

    Very pretty :-)
    (but the wicked side of me wonders what happened to the pearl and how was it found again . . . )

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  15. Caty31 January 2011 at 09:19

    Wow!!

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  16. bodhirose31 January 2011 at 09:27

    What a great 160, Gautami! Simply fantastic. :)

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  17. keithsramblings31 January 2011 at 14:55

    Made me come over a little hot! Loved it!

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  18. Kavita31 January 2011 at 16:27

    Call me corny.. but I am thinking oysters and molluscs :) I guess it was that pearl that made me think of shells and oysters.. or maybe I am just hungry :)

    But then again, this was very VERY HOT indeed! ;-)
    Loved it!

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  19. Possum31 January 2011 at 19:01

    My kneejerk reaction was a great big smile...still is. But the twist for me was the title...now I am thinking about the illusive bits.
    Lovely lovely 160

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  20. Ramesh Sood31 January 2011 at 19:50

    Is it an illusion..or so I thought reading this lovely piece.. written so well..

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  21. Tim Keen31 January 2011 at 20:17

    Very...good, exciting.

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