goes into that flat frying pan
oh, splattered bliss
bliss leaks from sides
releasing smells into my brain
making mouth water
but fish seek coke
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PS: No, I wasn't cooking the fish. It is all imagination.
new template, Gautami? :) seems ok, but the previous one sort of had a charm to it :D
ReplyDeleteanyways, cooking something that tasty should definitely make the mouth water I think :) though not a fish fan myself ;)
thanks for joining in at Haiku Heights :)
Lovely haikus.. Gautami.. not into non veg food of any kind so won't won't mind joining fish for a coke..
ReplyDeleteWell written as usual..
agh - i'm getting hungry….VERY descriptive writing!
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sweet and catchy, pass on the fish, but will drink some coke...
ReplyDeleteNice poem 160.
Joanny ---
The only kind of fish I like is Fried Fish with Chips. Not to forget the coke. :)
ReplyDeleteTwo lovely fishy poems!! Enjoyed reading.
Lovely Haikus. I love fish!! :D
ReplyDeletei enjoy a good fish...tasty 160. love the anticipation in those moments as you are cooking...
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Nice Haiku, but I must pass on the fish. So nice to know I'm not really the only vegetarian in the world!
ReplyDeleteHey...I LIKE this 160! But I always have trouble waiting for the marination....
ReplyDeleteHERE is mine
You got my mouth watering with this 160. Thanks for playing.
ReplyDeleteAren't you supposed to wait until the fish is served to start drinking?
ReplyDeleteMy 160 is here.
I can hear the sizzle. My mouth is watering too.
ReplyDeletewere you cooking it :P
ReplyDeletenice write :)
I liked the first stanza especially... love splattered bliss
ReplyDeletelove your Haiku 160.
ReplyDeletebrilliant job!
My Sunday 160
I think the taste lingers in your poem. What a savory piece for MMs 160.
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smiles from the Moon
Wish I had a fresh catch now! Coke rocks.
ReplyDeleteVery nice olfactory musings.
Citymom
I could see, hear and taste this 160. It doesn't get much better than that. :)
ReplyDeletePG
Very sensate...well done.
ReplyDeleteI was wondering what sort of coke you were referring to...
ReplyDeleteCandied Apple Bliss
A very graphic spattering of poetry. Well done. Thanks for visiting my 160, I work in a hospital so todays post is about a patient.
ReplyDeleteDelicious, delightful, satisfying!
ReplyDeleteAwesome 160 My friend..
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Lovely 160.. I enjoyed the Haiku's
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This was delightful - I smiled through the first stanza but my mouth was watering through the second
ReplyDeleteyum! Delish poem :)
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