that glass of Guinness-insight into it suddenly:uncannily cause no can
Maelstrom or ripple...?
This made me thirsty...lol. Great haiku!
Keats's name was written in water.
You manage the Monday Poetry Train, right? I've got another post for today, not a poem. There is an informal contest on another site and I've posted info about it.http://tasmith1122.wordpress.com/2010/02/01/word-of-the-month-poems-contest/If you think it's appropriate, would you consider posting it i the comments on Monday's Train? If not, don't worry about it. Hope you'll consider writing for it.Like what you see in the water!
Lovely haiku, Guatami. It's title twists it to another place.
Love how the title gives a certain ironic twist to see that persona as an illusion of sorts! Lovely haiku!
Those who bombard our thoughts also take form in our water swirls. I know some people like that who live in my coffee cup.Fun writing, my friend.
A vision, I like that.
I like the immediacy of this haiku.
Ssndy, Sandy: Double vision - have you considered trifocals?
Make no bones about it! There's a wet reality in this!!<3
jeeez, sometimes it's just all about them...everywhere...
A nice one Tami. You linked them all at once. Love it.Melanie
good word and image play, I like how "suddenly uncannily" swirl together...
I agree that glass of water made me thirsty. Nice!Pamela
nice haiku Gautami..it is always about whats in the glass...cheers
Loved staring into your glass...