Saturday, 16 January 2010

rays permeate

growing old with you-
incandescent emotions
aglow within my heart

24 comments:

  1. Clever to use links in the haiku back to the memes -- I like it, and the poem, serving two purposes and doing it so well.

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  2. Very well done-I have link envy too.

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  3. Nicely put Tami. Less is best.



    Melanie

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  4. Old flames can be extinguished - some stay alight...

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  5. “Less Is Best” - ?
    For Cassiopeia
    By Percy Bisque Silley, Knighted

    Less is best - yet how much less?
    Less by half or less two times?
    Nursery-rhyme short
    Or less than “War and Peace”
    Which still could be a lot?
    With derision then
    I snort upon thine imprecision
    And with condescension
    Perforce must say again:
    "Whatever"
    Only when I said it first
    Upon Gautami’s thread
    My comment's length
    Was ever so much less than this,
    Indeed, it was much less
    Than all those others writ before
    And therefore Best.

    Yours in Triumph,
    Sir Percy

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  6. beautiful expression .. so much love filled :)

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  7. Love the heavy, multi-textured beauty of "incandescent emotions"! Beautiful haiku!

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  8. Like fine wine, you need to let this breathe...

    <3

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  9. incandescent emotions aglow within my heart... Nice I love this one Thanks for Sharing. I look forward to reading you again next week.
    Larry.
    I'm posted also just follow the link below.


    For My Wife

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  10. Oh, what a nice feeling to write about.

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  11. It is so true that love shines through.

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  12. hello g...that love could last a lifetime along with the wrinkles...now that is heaven on earth....

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