if you ever change your mind, give me a ring
we’ll check out the weather to take out the boat
carrying food, clothes and other essential things
go out into the sea, whirring away we float
sleeping it out on the boat, soaking the sun in
to prevent from skin burns, I put up a shade
applying lotions, sunscreens on your fair skin
so soft, so smooth to touch, as velvety as suede
watch the sea waves so beautifully blue
against my better judgement I slowly reach
out, pulling you into me to love all of you
reaching for your finger, I push in the gold band!
Yes indeed! This relationship started the right way. Really nice writing. Happy Monday~
ReplyDeleteTook me by surprise.
ReplyDeleteGood ending. And that's quite a relationship.
ReplyDeleteNice! I'm a romantic at heart! Enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful descriptions in here!
ReplyDeleteFantastic jouney - long may it continue!
ReplyDeleteand he didn't even have to get down on one knee or did he? lovely poetry. good work
ReplyDeleteOh romance 'en cachette' very sneaky and poetic and beautiful and passionate :)
ReplyDelete*grin* Twisty! And delightful.
ReplyDeleteWish I had a clear view into the last two lines: at the moment I think you gave her no chance to say no ... surprising one!
ReplyDeleteBest wishes
Ralf
Brilliant...The ending esp...Too good
ReplyDeleteLoved the ending...a lovely journey indeed.
ReplyDeleteCertainly a lot of planning there!But the finale seemed pretty spontaneous!
ReplyDeletePositive flow full of hope.
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