playing powerfully
meaningful medly of melodies
within wavering waves.
songs, stimulating, simulating, simply straggling
inscribed inside interestingly
as thoughts; travesty travels , trailing
lagging. loftily lumbers
frivolously frolicking, fulfilling
contriving conclusive confidences
frivolously frolicking, fulfilling
lagging. loftily lumbers
as thoughts. travesty travels, trailing,
inscribed inside interestingly-
songs, stimulating, simulating, simply straggling
within wavering waves,
meaningful medly of melodies
playing powerfully.
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I suppose it does not make much sense. I took the irrational part of One Single Impression's prompt, Circle. And I can always call it poetic liberty!
O but it is rational! It captures the irrational of all that we are, the lives we lead, the thoughts we have! It is just perfect!
ReplyDeleteAdore the rolling sounds of the words too! They circle and wheel over the whole concept!
Beautiful!
Gemma
it make sense to me too
ReplyDeleteit's like playing music on a gloriously drunken evening
(obviously not something i would ever do)
and all held together by that alliteration
cheers (in all senses perhaps) :)
I'm with Greyscale and Floots. You have created music that is irrational in the way that circles are irrational--eternal and perfect. God bless.
ReplyDeleteWriting in Faith: Poems
Delightful alliteration :)
ReplyDeleteTo me, your words are the music of water flowing over rounded rocks.
ReplyDeleteYes, a symphony of alliteration! An alliterative fancy! You've done a really good job! Just love it! :D
ReplyDeleteGautama, I'm sorry but my "One Single Impression" is at http://maryt.wordpress.com
ReplyDeleteGautami, I called you the Buddha! I guess that's not so bad! Sorry again.
ReplyDeleteI love the alliterations.
ReplyDeleteNot only is it calming but it was fun to read out loud with all those magnificent alliterations.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
frolicksome, feisty, fervent, free-spirited, fun... alliteration always attracts aping... eeeek.... I like floots' idea of "gloriously drunken" music. Nice.
ReplyDeleteI love your use of alliteration!
ReplyDeleteAnd I forgot: SYMMETRY! Which I love here. I respond strongly to symmetry where ever I see it, so I love this.
ReplyDeleteI like it. There is a chaos to it that is quite of a circular nature.
ReplyDeleteEven in your irrationality you cannot escape your linear mathematical mind. It circles back upon its self and brings order to chaos. :)
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xo
Very interesting words and thoughts. Love all the all the alliteration too.
ReplyDeleteKind of like Jazz poetry!
ReplyDelete"Give me liberty or give me death" or some such quote. I like all your words circling together.
ReplyDeleteIrrational? Nice flow and rhythm circling...
ReplyDeleteI agree with eveyone else, the alliteration was fun to read, especially out loud. Reminds me of how I feel after too much coffee.
ReplyDeleteagree with the comments of others - it kind of tinkles along like music or water bubbling along...to its own beat.(sorry deleted my post as too many spelling errors...its late at night here...)
ReplyDeleteI thought it was lovely. It was like taking a lovely walk and then turning around to come back home.
ReplyDeleteoh what a perfect cirlce you weave...makes complete sense to me.. it does.
ReplyDeleteit for sure makes sense.
ReplyDeletei love the alliteration and how you use that so perfectly
the movement and sounds conveyed are charming as is your alliterations reflected...
ReplyDeletethis feels so... playful!
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