a raw rant

a recurring rant
rendered raw,
railing in there
my rank is rather low
rut created by you set in deep
why can't you remember
I am not my brothers
I am the daughter
you  never understood
somewhere down the line,
you stopped me from rotating

"yet you rallied for me
when I wrecked my heart"

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Sorry for this rant, but I needed to get it out. The "R"s helped and so did the limit of 55 words! More than enough, I would think!


Update: When I posted it, I was rather very angry. Not any more. So I interchanged couple of sentences. And it is no longer a rant. I could have taken it off. But am letting it stay. As a reminder to myself to control my anger.

insanely inconclusive----One Single Impression

playing powerfully
meaningful medly of melodies
within wavering waves.
songs, stimulating, simulating, simply straggling
inscribed inside interestingly
as thoughts; travesty travels , trailing
lagging. loftily lumbers
frivolously frolicking, fulfilling

contriving conclusive confidences

frivolously frolicking, fulfilling
lagging. loftily lumbers
as thoughts. travesty travels, trailing,
inscribed inside interestingly-
songs, stimulating, simulating, simply straggling
within wavering waves,
meaningful medly of melodies
playing powerfully.

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I suppose it does not make much sense. I took the irrational part of One Single Impression's prompt, Circle. And I can always call it poetic liberty!