Sunday 3 July 2011

gravitational pull

"I want to sizzle with you in the beach"
when I uttered those words-
you turned towards me,
those glorious eyes examined me

"then I disappeared into a crater"

10 comments:

  1. Just fabulous.. magic here.. well done..

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  2. I can imagine the scene. And feel it.

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  3. Sensuous feel to your Sunday 160. Thanks for playing along.

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  4. oh! I like this...I've disappeared into craters like that!

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  5. You created a warm sensation - a positive vibration, evocative write.

    joanny

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  6. This is wonderful--I've felt that gravitational pull myself!

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  7. romantic and hot.
    what a treat.

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  8. What a steamy write Tami. Love it. His eyes must be something else. Thank you...


    Melanie

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  9. Very interesting - when he acknowledges you, you disappear. I like it!

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  10. Oh no! Come out of that crater and sizzle! :)

    Good one.
    Here is mine:
    http://wordsinverse.wordpress.com/2011/07/06/the-void/

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