yikes, you must be folded up pretty tight...nice textures to this...the cobwebs of time...
I need some air...such a tiny space. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.
You capture a moment preceding conscious change—questioning of growing older and being in time.
I am blown away by this...like the cobwebs of time...well done...Namaste...Peace and blessings
nice word play....Happy sunday!
I ponder in midst of confettiscattered by unknown forcesIntriguing, nicely played enjambment.
I can feel those cobwebs. Very well done,Namaste..........cj
nicely done.. compression poems i like..
A haunting image you capture, and fits the picture prompt well...nice write...
good use of your wordsyou accomplished a lot here
Just love this line...I ponder in midst of confettiscattered by unknown forcesHow many words we leave like scattered confetti upon the unknown forces/faces.
such a great job.
this is great.love your 160.thought provoking.
I'm not either!
Very clever interpretation of the prompt.
Very interesting take on Phantom, Gautami!!
Gautami,As I have said so many times, it is pleasure to read you. I liked Walk the Past and this one the best out of pending ones I read. Take carePS : You may click on my name and navigate to my profile.
Oooh, lovely poem. Like the image of confetti... than so well describes the confusion of memory!Best wishes,AnnaBooks are heavy-Anna's SC wk 63
I like your take on the prompt! Great work...
love the scattering... it somehow makes everything all right...
very intense. i can picture the momentMy Centus
Oh wow. What perfect visualization. How creative you were to twist the link in this direction. Your writing always surprises me and makes me think.