Sunday, 10 July 2011

scrolled

rough notes
fragment of snatched words
unspoken yet loud
I find on that bench
in a hollow pipe
you left that scroll aeons ago
and the sign read thus

silence

20 comments:

  1. Some people can have the effect of making us roll our words out of sight, in silence...

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  2. silence is often a blessing itself...

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  3. Goodness gracious ... well done!!!

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  4. And to know the silence.. beautiful... Gautami..

    I invite you to my 300th post and would love to seek your feedback..?

    It will inspire..

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  5. I agree with all of the above! So very lovely!

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  6. wow, so little words, but such a big impact. loved it.

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  7. that second line is brilliant, good one.

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  8. oh you convey so much with so few words ... this was beautiful

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  9. "unspoken yet loud" - great line!

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  10. Yes! silence is golden...and this is awesome, thank you!

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  11. "...snatched words
    unspoken yet loud..."

    Powerful words, I say. This is a lovely poem, expressing so much in so few words.

    Namaste..........cj

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  12. Such quiet power you've shared here in so few words.

    Brilliant.

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