Some people can have the effect of making us roll our words out of sight, in silence...
I love this !
silence is often a blessing itself...
Goodness gracious ... well done!!!
And to know the silence.. beautiful... Gautami.. I invite you to my 300th post and would love to seek your feedback..? It will inspire..
I agree with all of the above! So very lovely!
wow, so little words, but such a big impact. loved it.
A very visual piece!
I like this!
that second line is brilliant, good one.
oh you convey so much with so few words ... this was beautiful
"unspoken yet loud" - great line!
Yes! silence is golden...and this is awesome, thank you!
"...snatched wordsunspoken yet loud..."Powerful words, I say. This is a lovely poem, expressing so much in so few words.Namaste..........cj
Such quiet power you've shared here in so few words.Brilliant.