Saturday 16 April 2011

"more" me


with knick knacks
I have created space
that is unique to me
in a palette
colours bleed into each other
merging my soul
I have thrown shackles
at threshold of me

22 comments:

  1. Your page most of the time make me sit and wonder..and think.. you create master pieces and that can happen only with the help of an unshackled mind..and heart.. when spirit flows in abundance..no boundaries..total freedom to create.. Thanks Gautami..happy to be here..

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  2. Love the idea of knick knacks symbloising elements of a personality! How true! Lovely poem!

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  3. A peep into the SPACE WITHIN. Unique to each one.

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  4. I love the word "threshold" here! It surprised me and I had to think about it but it's perfect!

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  5. Very interesting thoughts and comparisons. How true for us all.

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  6. i kinda like it when the colors bleed...not so much with shackles..

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  7. Knick Knacks are an expression of color and self. I like this. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.

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  8. my bookshelves
    the spaces I planned
    to leave empty

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  9. ones knick knacks certainly speak volumes of who they are, love this poem.

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  10. Nice interpretation Gautami

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  11. You write beautiful succinct poetry... I enjoyed my visit.
    Thanks for stopping by my blog. I'm following you via GFC.
    Best,
    Elizabeth

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  12. A wonderful space to visit...
    very well written.

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  13. The space within and without match...perfect!

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  14. "shackles at threshold of me" hmmm I am savouring/pondering this, sweet!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

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  15. Ah, I like how you put this, Gautami--very clever and beautifully done.

    My potluck entry: http://bodhirose.wordpress.com/2011/04/06/lovely-horror/

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  16. nice.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/

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  17. so lovely, thank you!

    Luna

    http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/

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  18. Lovely and nicely put my friend....

    Melanie

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