so many great lines here Gautami...soo good to read...thanks for sharing your words
Very passionate and nicely written.. liked it..dew drops are so soothing..
nice! i like the way water blends all things together.
Beautifully sensual piece, Gautami.Pamela
It's ALL goooood; and the last stanza's a killer.
Water is a sign of life as is love.
Great crescendo effect, building to the last stanza.
Wonderfully intimate and sensuous. And I love those last lines. It builds and then fulfills itself. Elizabeth
Beautiful - it offers delicious imagery and a lyrical flow.
This is wonderfully sensual and sexy!
beautifully sensual ... :)
This made me want to lick dew from my fingers.
Intimate, mood-suffusive work. Excellent.
dew la la...:)
Beautiful and very sensuous.Anna :o]
Coming around full circle! Nice-I tasted water on glass first - kind of metallic, because our water is...then rose water - which is a bit softer.Thanks!
Loved this! :)