Nicely done ShadormaOne suggestion on the second line the syllable count is I think one over - you could take " that" out and it would still read nicelyHope you enjoyed getting to know the ShadormaMoondustwriter
whooo, amazing words strung together here. amoral rendition -- let me stay away from doing renditions like that!xoxo
Frozen Impact... powerfulI like that photo, btw.
ouch, that was a bullet!!!! :)http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
Thank you. I enjoyed your exploration of the form. :-)
i think in many ways we have forgotten that stillness having extended our night with artificial light...but stillness we need...
Nice tight poem.
Nice tight light.
intriguing photo, too! :)
this reminder of stillness, it gave me peace. thank you.