wow, tight and inviting. I got sucked in.
Entangles your pauses. Certainly has that feel to it. Enjoyed the way you implement this style. Very effective.
Great flow and rhythm with this Sunday 160. Cool that you combined the two challenges. Thanks for playing along again this week.
I love the vaccuum. I read your piece before really looking at the picture. See her float afterwards was a delight! Thanks for this Sunday morning treat.~Brenda
wow...you open up quite a can in a few words...big smiles.
I love how the yellow thread entangles your pauses and that the gap is filled with sensual poetry!
Beautifully illustrated, delicious little poem!quid
Gravity defying post!
Love it, Gautami, perfect to the photo.Pamela
i love the way it ends.The fun colors and the poetic depth merge beautifully.
This, I thought, was an appropriate response to Brendan's poem today. Sensual poetry..filling the spaces. Wonderful piece..I liked "entangles your pauses" too.
Phew, you got me bouncing off the pavement!<3
"Entangles your pauses." That's fabulous.
Love the first four lines of this: stunning stuff; solid finish.
Nice phrasing here. You give a little but leave us a lot to add ourselves. Cute!http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/04/11/evolution-in-a-nutshell/
I read your info, then a few of your poems, and I can totally see the mind of a mathematician in your beautiful, calculated poems. Thanks for sharing!
Ok, seriously this is fabulous. I am enrapture by the play and beauty here.
great write! mines here~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/18/natures-gravity/
sensual poetry is something that is good for me :)get up, get up, get up...
the gaps are wherethe wonder lies =)
Interesting Input.Liked it!